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I really enjoy reading the dynamics of your characters.
wonderful.

thank you and happy holidays:)

Chapter 77 & 78. XD loved chapter 77! the whole prank and how it all played out was hilariously entertaining. i would love to see a one shot or short series of how Darrent and Garner came to where they were before they met Shikamaru and Naruto. that would be a gem. really liked how chapter 78 went with the Zetsu and Konan. now to see what Hana will do when she meets Kiba..... that would be interesting. can't wait to read the next chapters and hopefully, my full week of work next week won't keep me away. XD greatly appreciate the updates and hard work putting the story together! thanks a bunch!

[ch.77] Delightful~! One tiny thought: I expected more from the conversation between Klenn and Haru. It was kind of anti-climatic. I guess I expected some kind of insight into their shared genius type.

Now I feel bad... That wasn't a criticism of ch.77 - just feedback. I am always left wanting more with your work because it is so rich and deep. There is always more to wonder about. That is part of the fun of your universe. ♥

So cute. I loved the children. Sasuke & Naruto are so evil in this chapter.

OMG!! Ahahahahaha..hahahaha..I loved this chapter!! How wonderful that they pranked Klenn using the children!! He completely deserved it :) I loved how it was very much a Sasuke and Naruto prank :) I can just see the utter chaos on stage with the children and then Ryu...hahaha. Leave it Naruto though to turn a teasing prank into a lovely gift though, after all he did help to save Haru and Shika :)*Clapping* great job!!

awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww. that was adorable. I like their pranking policy.
That day probably meant a lot to Kell as well.

Funny and sweet. I laughed so hard during the planning of the prank and during the description of Klenn's reaction.
I must admit that I'm liking Klenn more and more.

awesome naru and sasu take their revenge to darren. I love it I imagine the face of darent it's so funny. love this story!!! see you soon

Awww. I hope that Klenn finds some peace and allows someone in. Even if it is only one person (maybe Garner) then maybe he can get closer to whole. Maybe seeing Haru with his family and how it could be will help him to heal. I would love it if they had more regular interaction with Klenn- letting it slip out that they are allies of a sort would probably do a lot to help quell Sasuke's security (fully justified) paranoia since everyone is terrified of getting on Klenn's bad side. They could visit him on his home planet for a vacation of sorts and be assured of safety there. Regardless, I think it would be good for people on both sides.

What I am curious about is Naruto's origin. He is a Bara hybrid, but Bara died ages ago- meaning that Naru was in stasis until recently. Did someone take him out of stasis? If so then it must have been for a purpose and not to let him grow up as a feral child. There has got to be a story there and my overactive imagination will not stop bugging me with possible scenarios. Maybe Klenn could help them find out or could find out for them and tell them as a gift for allowing him to feel a sense of family.