rate_review Reviews

Oh Queenie the opening with Papa time was so wonderful I think I smiled the hole way thought:) Of course the prank was a true Naruto personality trait:) But the surprise was on me Darrent-san enjoyed it all! I would have though he would be trying to get away as soon as possible. It was sweet how he enjoyed his self. When Tsuneo didn't cry I knew Darrent-san was being sincer:) I think all the children liked him?! Great Queen of the Naruto Space Universe I'm ~Bowing~ to you. That was fantastic! The title was spot on. Thank you for all your hard work ^_^

Okay. Klenn Darrent is officially forgiven for trying to take Shikamaru away from Uchiha.

*cocks head to the side* why is Klenn toxic? is it because he loves the ppl around him too much or he smothers them and they begin to wither? I really liked this chapter because it gave us a little more insight into the inner workings of a very old dog's mind. I rather enjoyed it. Also I totally understand where Parrad (sp?) is coming from w/ Sasuke and his playing. Ummm, I was wondering if it's not too much trouble could there be some scenes with Hamaki, Terai, and Fuu. They don't have to be a chapter long I just want to know how they are doing. Well that's all i gots for today

ja ne till next time and keep up the awesomesauce work

That was way better than I thought it was going to be. It was so nice to see Klenneth in a new, warmer light. I love that we got to more time with Haru and Sasuke. As well as more time with the children and they were each singled out and given something unique to them which is really good for me because I have a hard time telling them apart. I think we got to see different sides to characters we may have thought we knew already and Klenneth and Garner's love story sounds very interesting to me. I hope we can get a little more info on that, maybe not a whole story but maybe a side chapter like with Rin and Dan. I think I will read the chapter again, I liked it so much. Great job.

Love love love this chapter! Klenn is a character that is growing on me. & this is a wonderful chapter. I love how you showed the human side of Klenn & how he is not always the all powerful man that he is. Wonderful writing as usual. You are really talented. & yes I would buy your books! :D

& I love this chapter so much that I read it 3x today already!!!!! :D

hahahaha = the updates fly from your fingers faster than I can review:)
just wanted to let you know that delving into your Uchia past is always interesting,
and happy that your Konohmaru is finding his way.
thank you.

oh now you have to go and gather feelings of sympathy for KD!
like I said a very interesting and necessary OC, and Garner Parrod is being expanded a bit, that will be nice to find out about.

very fun chapter and wonderful to see your character development.
it's great to see that you Naruto is very different and original, but still parallels the
manga's Naruto in empathy:)
thank you.

Another great chapter. I love to read about discovery, about someone discoveruing something new about the world. I also love when people who are doing wrong are put in their place, guess I have this thing about positions of power and using that power. It was nice to read about other characters, too.

konohamaru has got a promotion !!! it will be hard but the start is full of promise. naru will change terassade. love this story . see you sooni