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by mannahpierce

person xxShadowheartxx
schedule April 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Gomen, gomen, I haven't reviewed in awhile, I've just been so busy. But I've finally caught up, and I still love your work. This story got so many great twists and turns, I don't think I'll ever get tired of reading it. :D

I love how you sorta brought Ranmaru back in Ran. He's so cute sometimes.
person lonelylulaby
schedule April 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
HI!!!! Life just took a hold on me and wouldn't let go. Anywho LOVED LOVED LOVED this chapter. I just want you to know that you are a very deep writer. I feel like I'm watchin a tv series every time I read a chapter. I especially liked the different points of view in this chapter. I think once school lets out ima read the story from start to finish over the summer cause the characters have just evolved and I want to go through the process again with them.

ja ne till next time and keep up the good work
schedule April 16, 2011 at 12:00 AM
awwwww, Kono kun is healing. Thats great. I hope he finds another someone special in the future.
person satterb
schedule April 16, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Kono-kun is going to have to learn to bust some chops! lol Another great update. I like how the narrative from any one persons point of view gives the reader the necessary information, but makes it interesting to see the characters feelings and opinions. You're the best! Keep up the great work.
schedule April 16, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Wow. Lots of stuff going on in this chapter.

When Kamatari asked Kono-kun about Naruto helping the purebreds as well as the hybrids, my ears perked. It hadn't occurred to me that Naruto was, consciously or otherwise, facilitating bias by his actions. I don't feel that he is, it only surprised me that someone might have interpreted his efforts that way. But that's the way of the world isn't it? If you're for something you invariably have to be against something else.

And life goes on...
person roro237
schedule April 16, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I loved it! You had a lot of people in your computer room again:) You zoom me into their space station and I totally enjoyed ^_^
schedule April 16, 2011 at 12:00 AM
It was really interesting to see more of the inner working of the refit of Uchiha into Tarrasade as well as Maru moving on with his life. We are also getting to know Kamatari more and I think I saw some interest into Konohamaru there that I would not be adverse to. It would be nice to see Konohamaru have someone new in his life.
person v
schedule April 16, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I'm really enjoying these chapters..I'm catching up with the characters with out the highs and lows of disaster and danger and WTF!! climaxes..although I really enjoy those too :) I love that were getting to learn more about them as they deal with certain emotional and social challenges with their plan for the future still firmly in mind. It is still very exciting but also gives me a chance to build the story in my head as I read..I'm also happy about Konomaru's new job title, I hope he's able to find his purpose :)..I've also found that I adore the tidbits about Yuki, I of course love all the children equally, but I'm able to picture Yuki easier than the others..may be because he seems like a combination of Haku and Naruto..lol :)
person Kat Saama
schedule April 15, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Brilliant keep it up ^^
schedule April 15, 2011 at 12:00 AM
that was tough. facing your ghosts is never easy. Sas is lucky he has such good back up. Go Naru.