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person satterb
schedule April 9, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Again....sitting here crying like some kind of boob! lol I love this particular story line. I'm so glad Iruka was able to give Ran a cuddle, and I'm glad Kakashi agreed to become part of the family. Thanks for all that you do.
person roro237
schedule April 9, 2011 at 12:00 AM
That was so wonderful:) I sure as heck didn't see that coming. I mean Kakashi going to Haur for help! Which was brilliant by the way:) I'm so happy to know that Haur is like Sasuke to because I was thinking like Kakashi he is Shika in a Sasuke package. The tittle so fit this chapter ^_^
person cynaga
schedule April 9, 2011 at 12:00 AM
[ch 74] Very lovely! ♥
schedule April 9, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Ran is such a beautiful addition to the crew. That was a really amazing chapter. I am really also starting to see te ever growing dynamic of Haru and Kazuki.
person richon
schedule April 9, 2011 at 12:00 AM
haru is genius. They will be a real family now. love this story.craving for more
schedule April 9, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Klennethon Darrent - still have mixed feelings about him,
but I think he is a great OC, and very much necessary.

I would like to see Neji's POV.
person Kat Saama
schedule April 9, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Nawh bless! That was just amazing and so cute too! Thank you, wonderful work as usual please keep it up!
schedule April 9, 2011 at 12:00 AM
*sniff.
that was so, so sweet.
*wonders off to brush my teeth before the sweetness gives me cavities.
person SunaoTsuji
schedule April 8, 2011 at 12:00 AM
haha loved how chapter 37? or was it 73? yea, 73, ended. i can tell that the possibilities are endless and i can't wait to read what happens! me guess at what may happen? a drop off cliff of an unexpected occurrence! thanks for the updates and hard work! looking forward to more updates!
schedule April 8, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I've just read 29th chapter and I met my first disappointment with the story. It was refreshing and great that there was no Sakura. Well... I guess I will just have to deal with it.