rate_review Reviews

Hi! I have read everything you have! Well, at least on this site. You have such great stories and I love your universe you have created. I look forward to reading more. i don't think that anything I will ever write will compare to the complex series you have created. I love the length of the chapters, the characters are well-written in my opinion and the story is always something new and never gets old. This chapter I love the way Naruto thinks during the interviews, he was taught well! Keep on keeping on!

Busy is right! I like that we got to see some of the goings ons in Naruto's world. And that the whole chapter was from Naruto's pov. I just love Haru chan's demanding "How does this work?" He is so Sasuke and Shika, it's hilarious. I wouldn't mind seeing him meet Klenneth, I think everyone should have the opportunity to be amazed by Haru. I hope we get some more time with the other children and the kits, I'm ashamed to say I still don't know half their names or who they are personally except for Haru, Kazuki, and maybe Ryuu.

what a busy day, naru did a great job with his little show. Love this story.craving for more

I am glad that Naruto is warming up to Klenn and that Sasuke is becoming more amenable to working with Klenn and vice versa. Also happy that they are considering let Haru meet him- it would be nice for him to meet someone who thinks in the same way that he does. That might help alleviate some of his isolation.

Hi, I'm back! another chappy for the record books, I look forward to knowing what type of typed genius Haru is. I can't wait for the next chapter. Great job, I don't want them to grow up. I'm trying to visualize the portrait of the Uchiha family and I just can't. I think i might have to draw it....no promises I am a procrastinator.

ja ne till next time and keep up the good work

That Klenn is dedicated, isn't he? What the hell did Shikamaru do to that guy?

I enjoyed this chapter very much, I'm also glad that your in charge of leading everyone where they need to go, I adore the characters and storyline so much that I could be happy just reading about their daily routine and I forget that they're trying to build something legendary. Also a new favorite excerpt of mine :

“What do you want to do?” he asked the children.
They were too surprised for his liking. Hikaru recovered first.
“Play netbag?” he suggested.
“Dancing with To-chan!” Yuki squeaked.

I wanna dance with To-chan, too!!! lol..I can just imagine. Kinda liking Klenn more and more, and I'm glad reprint Ranmaru is safe and cared for. Can't wait for the next chapter :)

“Dancing with To-chan! Dancing with To-chan!” the others called, even Hikaru.

OMG!!! YOU are totally Amazing!! Do you still have all those people in your house?:) You covered an incredible day in the life's of our To-chan and Papa. I loved every word ^_^

Brilliant work as usual please keep it up ^^

I LOVE how you are developing Ran. Can't wait for more!
~Nemo-Hime