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person richon
schedule April 3, 2011 at 12:00 AM
ran integrate the family slowly, don't worry iruka you will be his mommy; love this story want to know how they will be in terrasade... see you soon
schedule April 3, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 72. Aw~ Kazuki was cute and Haru was extremely cute doing his best not to scare Ran away. :D Thanks for the update and I hope to read more!
person roro237
schedule April 2, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh Queenie that was beautiful! Ir-chan of course will be even more than Ran can hope for:) You know what I want to get in the 'snug' with Naruto and the children. I bet it's the most comfortable sleep ever! Hoshi is adorable. I liked how she tried to include Ran in their play. Every great clan has to have an even stronger women behind the scenes and Hoshi will be that for the Uchihas. Kazuki was to cute in his inter actions with Ran. I loved it:) I did wonder what Haur has been up to that Kiba was keeping an eye on him?:) I was so wrapped up in the children I almost forgot about the media and the family moving to Tarrasade. I'm looking forward to that! The title was great:) This was another adventures day in the life's of my favorite people:) Thank you for all your hard work Oh Great Queen of the Naruto Space Universe ^_^
person cynaga
schedule April 2, 2011 at 12:00 AM
♥ Maybe touching children would always be fine. Maybe children never felt horrid. [Ran's thoughts] ♥
person V-anon
schedule April 2, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Kakashi to the rescue~ Thank you for the last two chapters. Ran is making progress :)
person v
schedule April 2, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I'm excited about the move to Tarrasade, I hope everything goes smoothly..I do have much sympathy for Iruka but I think Kakashi is doing very well in helping his relationship with Ran and supporting him. It shows how much he feels for his Ir-chan, because I do believe he's much to spoiled by Iruka :)lol. Lets hope Ran and Iruka relationship deepens because I believe they really do need each other, loved this chapter.
person satterb
schedule April 2, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I really cried!!!!! This was sooo heartbreaking. I feel so bad for Iruka. I hope you don't string him along for too much longer. Iruka deserves sooo much. I love this story, and I appreciate all your hard work. Thank you for updating so often.
schedule April 2, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Gosh, reading this story makes me feel so good! Who could have imagined the shinobi of Naruto being loving, nurturing parents to such a variety of children! This story isn't just a masterpiece, it's a celebration!
schedule April 2, 2011 at 12:00 AM
really nice to have Ran's perspective
simplistic, age appropriate, heartbreaking and hopeful.

the interaction with Haru was especially nice.
someone his age and size to give a simple concise
explanations for him.

and won't it be magical when (if?) he holds out his hand to Iruka.

thank you.

person Kat Saama
schedule April 2, 2011 at 12:00 AM
"Mommy Irkura" ... am I such a softie for reading this on mothers day and being even more moved by it? Oh well great work as usual please keep it up ^^