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This was a good chapter. I like that we are delving deeper into how Uchiha is going to sustain itself in the coming years. What everyone needs to work on, whether the children will cat for other crews, etc. I agree with Sasuke in not being sure how I feel about the babies one day catting for other crews. It's the spacer way but I don't like the thought of them having to service the crew in such a way. The subject of individuality has come up as well with the uniform question. I think as the kits get older they will have to be allowed some freedoms and if done right I think it would be possible for them to have the freedom of choosing their own clothes, maybe once a week they can wear whatever they want. With the hiring of employees, I am nervous that will give our enemies greater access to infiltrating Uchiha and we will once again have a scare like we did with Shika and Haru.

Not a lot happened here but it definitely planted food for thought. Good job as always, I look forward to whatever happens next.

WoW! You covered a lot! I forgot about getting the head quarts up and running. With what happen to Shika and Hura. This chapter was just amazing! The kids and Kiba. The Triplets and To-chan and Papa. You toss in some Shik Neji Kakashi and a few other crew members wOw! I'm ~Bowing~ to you Oh Great Queen of the Naruto Space Universe. My favorite part was.... To-chan and Papa in the tub with the little ones:) Then Naruto watching Sasuke dress the girls I'm with Naruto that was so sweet. Maybe I had a small nose bleed during the quickie:)I loved this chapter Queenie ^_^

Sasuke wouldn't do something as underhanded as get Naruto to agree to something so important while he was post-coital! What on earth was Kakashi suggesting?;)

I am ashamed that I fell off the review band wagon *puts out hand to be smacked by ruler* Anywho I loved the last line about the Naruto-ization of Uchiha. I'm a miss him when he's gone. And I'm just like Sasuke, I cannot imagine the kit's and babies going off to another crew to cat, just unimaginable. Maybe I will be able to see it once the 700 crews that they have have been cut down and we get to know them. Maybe. Once again another excellent job and just great characters.

ja ne till next time and keep up the good work

Another beutifully written chapter. :) Thank you.

this has just the right ulcer level for everyone!
your Kono, floundering for his place to fit in, trying to be helpful with Ran
and causing stress for everyone. including himself.

your Iruka, would never complain and accepts any help, but he must be shredded inside (and a touch jealous too) that Ran does not turn to him for comfort. and good for Kakashi being there for him!

perhaps an event will happen where Iruka will become a hero in Ran's eyes. I do recall
your Iruka being particularly adept with a knife when one of his was threatened...
perhaps all it will take is a touch of Iruka's hand for the little empath to feel all that love.

nice flow and progress, very nicely done:)
thank you.

PS - He had just finished demolishing one of Choza’s individual fruit pies when Konohamaru appeared with Ran. The child was filthy; Kakashi had not thought the Oak dirty until Ran’s frequent excursions.
hahaha - this was a great moment by the way:)

Ran liked being close to Konohamaru. He felt nice, like Mommy.
are you saying Ran remembers his Mom?

Internets back so twas nice reading the last two chapters together! Poor Ran-chan I nearly cried at the end of chapter 70 the pooor thing. As usual brilliant work please keep it up!

O god, that last part at the end... 'Real children do this'... so beautifully painful...
I adore it as always dear.
~Nemo-Hime

thank you for updating :)
Your development of Ran is very good in my opinion and I can kind of see Ranmaru.1 (or who I consider to be .1) in his thought process. But it is different enough.