rate_review Reviews

This is one my favorite chapters in the last few. It is hard to imaging what Konahamaru is feeling dealing with Ran. I think what I like best about this is even with everything Ran endured he still has that innocence that only small children can have.

ran is finaly up and he is not so difficult. it's not kay but he is more an humain. Love this story, naru was dangerous a true dominant!!see you soon

Oh, please don't torture Iruka too long. He really deserves some happiness. He's been patient with everyone elses issues, Iruka should be satisfied too. I see that Kakashi will be happy as long as Iruka is, but I think that's a cop out on his part. Maybe he should start training Ran to fight, to teach him to defend himself and his new family. I think Kakashi would love to find something of his own to be proud of with Ran. Just suggestions, I love this story anyway you write it. It always turns out wonderful!

I see the situation being very hard on Iruka because its been quite awhile since he's dealt with such a damaged child. Ran's thought process is also very sad, but I know his knew family will help him..I can't wait to see him interact with the children. I'm worried about Kono...I don't know what to hope happens for him because his life did revolve around his Ranmaru...very happy with the last two chapters :) humourous but a little sad also..can't wait for the next :)

I have to tell you how spoilded I am. I have been checking to see if you posted all morning! My Saturday wouldn't have been right without you in it:) It was so sweet I loved it! I'm thinking Ran-chan will have two dads and a wonderful big brother in Konohamaru. ^_^

ch. 70 - Beautiful~!

maybe now I'm real...

chapter 70 review...

dude you have a way of making the simplest things in your story tear at my heart...this one made me teary-eyed!! poor ran-chan he thinks he is not a "real" boy.....like pinnochio......so sad!!!!!!

I adore Chouza.

oh something I forgot to add in the other review, I'm a little sorry that Iruka was not the first person to hold Ran.
not that your Iruka would be anything but grateful, but still it was an important moment that should have been Iruks's.

Hahahahahahahah! I cannot wait to see Iruka's attempt at explaining the howling. He got super uncomfortable when having to talk to Naruto in the abstract about their sex life so his level of awkward when attempting to explain it to a child should be AWESOME! Maybe Naruto will help take Ran in hand and get him to understand that he is in a good, safe place. The other children should be able to help with goal- assuming that any of the parents allow the children around him until they are sure he is safe. Hopefully Kakashi and Iruka will not beat themselves up too terribly about what happened.