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March 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I love this story, I love that you have continued it for so long. I hope there will be many more chapters to come. You truly are a gifted writer. Maybe someday I'll have the pleasure of reading one of your works in print. If not, I am more than happy to catch your work here. Thank you for it, and thank you Small Fox for your work in this as well.
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March 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Ehehehehehehe. Ran is already giving them a run for their money. I love it! XD
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March 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
CH. 69 - Ran!!! How amazing to see how he views the Uchiha world!
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March 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
That a was excititing first day with the crew!!!! Ran will be quite the new addition. I see him getting along with the children really well once he has some training because he still has that wildness about him that Naruto had even though he isnt a hybrid. He is a empath though. Once he gets over his aversion to touching people he will be able to tell that everyone wats what is best for him and just want to care for him. Seeing Naruto goo off like that was just Like Wild Kingdom, that was amazing. Great Chapter. Looking Forward To Saturday.
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March 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
The children are soooo cute. I love the individual personalities! This was a heart pounding chapter. I'm glad that Ran isn't as feral as he is self protective. Thanks for this wonderful chapter. I always look forward to your next update!!!!
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March 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I'm still laughing at Papa telling Ya-chan don't sniff people until you know them well enough to ask:) That tickled me so much because having kids you're always telling them done do that but I never had to stop them from that one:) I love it! I have a new respect for the parents of kits:) My poor Naruto is stress oh no maybe not there was howling at the end:) Ok right now everything is funny to me! I have the giggles. It's your fault for making me laugh:) I loved it! ^_^
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March 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
OMFG LMAO Ran must have PISSED himself when Naruto broke into a sprint behind him!
There should be 248,000 hits on this story, not just 24,000...
There should be 248,000 hits on this story, not just 24,000...
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March 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
hahaha - I'm really not sure why their is no soundproofing on Nar/Sas room!
I remember you writing it comforted the crew that their leader was happy(and horny),
but with children about...I believe they might want to reconsider:)
what an intelligent, exciting, and emotional roller-coaster you put them all on.
Iruka and Kakashi are going to have challenges and great rewards.
Thank you.
I remember you writing it comforted the crew that their leader was happy(and horny),
but with children about...I believe they might want to reconsider:)
what an intelligent, exciting, and emotional roller-coaster you put them all on.
Iruka and Kakashi are going to have challenges and great rewards.
Thank you.
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March 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
“Everything is working well,” Ran assured him. “We are getting excellent data about his brain function.” <---I think you meant Rin. That last line of Iruka jumping up and exclaiming that he didn't explain Naruto's howling was hilarious, a great way to end the chappy. I hope Ran gets over his fear of dogs. Also I totally didn't know which person was the one Ran ran into until you said it. So, is Kono-kun going to be what Shika and Inari are to Haru and Hikaru? Oh man, this chapter was just awesomesauce and I can't wait till the next one.
ja ne
ja ne
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March 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
O, I just ADORE Naruto in all his forms. Might I ask for a bit more Haku? ^^; I love him so much. XD
Well done as always. Again, when you have the time and if you feel like it, I would love to talk to you, but I understand if you are busy.
Thank you for entertaining us!
~Nemo-Hime
Well done as always. Again, when you have the time and if you feel like it, I would love to talk to you, but I understand if you are busy.
Thank you for entertaining us!
~Nemo-Hime