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person KL
schedule September 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
keeps getting cut off, but this story is awesome
person Aflyingmonkey123
schedule September 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
~NUUUUUUUU~ Amazing Chapter!!!! Mannah-san! I love it. Greaat as always Mannah-san!
person moonmoore
schedule September 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Hopefully, he is well on the road of recovery. Thank god everything is going well. I want the next one so much to see just how well Naru is. Thank you!

Haru is adorable. He sure thinks like an adult sometimes.
person roro237
schedule September 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I'm near tears myself. I'm so happy!!! The operation was a success!! Well we know the important part is working right:) Space Queen I didn't know if you would post today?! But at work today I was hoping just maybe 117 would be up! And just like Naruto it was up!!! I'm so glad Sasuke went to see Iruka-sensei. Kakashi fans the Ninken crew. They always put a smile on my face:) Dan has helped Doctor Rin fine her bed side manners huh! Haur was so sweet with his worries and to think Ka-chan has such insight. I like to think of Ka-chan as road-runner:) You know me Queeny but I will say it just for kicks:) My favorite part was Naruto waking up and the tear filled eyes of Sasuke. That was the best! I loved it every word of it! ~Bowing~ You are amazing. Thank goodness you hosted the six shooter for a minute:) My bullet wounds have healed with this chapter ^_^ I can't go without saying 'Yea Baby' the title said it all!
person cynaga
schedule September 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
[ch 117] Beautiful~!
schedule September 27, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh GODS I missed this ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

Gaara was cute. He tries so hard. I feel kid of bad for him because those were just ordinary children's questions. What will he do when Haru starts to ask his own????? ^_^
The whole Klenn thing still scares me...and makes me sad. Especially when it reminds me of an inevitable future of poor Naruto.
Moegi was creepy... Like some pedophile seducing a child...*shudders*
schedule September 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
snickers. poor Gaara... poor Udon to. Still, Udon's getting the better deal. wow, level C's coming along in leaps and bounds huh?
schedule September 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
chapter 116. i'm greatly anticipating Darrent and Shika's get together. and i'm now i'm want a one-shot challenge with Darrent and Shika getting down n dirty between the sheets before Neji's arrival and without anyone else in Uchiha knowing. woooo now i want to know how that will all play out. thanks for the update and i hope to read more from you soon! appreciate you and your beta's hard work putting the story together. <3333
person richon
schedule September 25, 2011 at 12:00 AM
yes you back, poor gaara, the children will not stop asking questions !! you right it will be long, love this story !! see you soon
schedule September 25, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This was a nice filler chapter. I am happy to see Gaara and Lee again. I think Gaara's thoughts are pretty funny and oh so deadpan all the time. It was interesting to see Moegi's progress with Udon, I'm glad that she is determined to make this relationship work and jump through whatever hoops she has to. I will say that Klenneth's thoughts about Shika and Sasuke ever being together gave me pause. It is true that Shika and Naru have a very close bond, I'm not sure that Sasuke will ever have that with Shika. Sasuke often has to be nudged himself in the right direction by Naruto much like Shika by Neji, so I can't see them being successful together in a romantic relationship. I do like that Neji keeps Klenneth in check now by making Shika late to their appointments, that's such a Neji thing to do. Good job, I can't to read more.