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Amazing as usual ^^ Keep it up! ^^

GAH!!!! This story just gets me soo excited. I love how Iruka is going to be the one to raise feral Ranmaru and they get to visit Haven! Too geeked. I really like the chapter before, Haru is just too smart. I loved the scene with him and Hikaru. Then the den/snug scene in this chapter just touched my heart strings. They are all growing up. And I don't want them too. I feel as though I am a part of this family and I'm watching all this happen first hand. Time is flying. You have AWESOME character development and I don't think anyone else could pull this saga off half as good as you are. Oh, and the part in the chapter where Yoshimi (I think) asked why Papa wanted more kids, I wouldn't have know the answer, the first thing that popped into my head was 'cause you guys (kits) are going to die and leave me all alone' and you cannot tell children that. lol Anywho I really liked these chapters. I think I'm going to read the whole story all over again cause it's just an awesome fanfiction. I do believe this is the longest review I have ever written.

ja ne till next time and keep up the good work

PS Konohamaru's reasoning behind why they needed to keep feral Ranmaru on the ship was very sound. Can't wait for the adventures to come.

I love it when Kakashi gets all crazy when it comes to Iruka, and how wonderful that they might end up raising the feral Ranmaru, plus I'd love to see how five and his little family is doing, i got such a kick out of him. I'm happy to get a break from the stress of the kidnapping, to see the family interacting together with their different perspectives and personalities. Although the adventure of the story is wonderful, the day to day of it is just as good and I think helps me to connect with all the characters. can't wait for the next chapter :)

you for thinking outside the box Naru and killing two birds with one stone. Ir chan can learn about ferals and check on their protoges at the same time. Yay for multitasking. ^^
And he'll need to learn. poor 'Keshi... this isn't going to be easy.

iruka has got a hard challenge but it will be good for everybody to see ranmaru. love this fic. see you soon

"Kiba had wanted to wag the tail he did not have."

this was a fun line!
this whole chapter brought a much needed smile to my face.
long week of illness and obligations:(

but like I said you make it interesting/different without going
over the top. Was Ranmaru's name his feral name, or one the Akatsuki chose?
also I would like to see a little Iruks/Kakashi baby - perhaps Kakashi will surprise himself
and want one too after getting a taste of parenting his own:)

Woah! I didn't even think that Iruka will be the one to raise Ranmaru! Wow...... Btw the image of Yuki in a kimono is still sticking in my brain! :)

I chuckle at Kakashi's dilemma! He's not "selfish" per say, but he is content with his life and selfish with his Iruka. I would love to see him find something to love about being a "parent" to Ranmaru. He's capable of loving and needing Iruka, I would think that if Ranmaru were to have some quality that touches his heart, or makes him a "proud papa" it would be lovely! Thanks for another wonderful update to this incredible universe you've created. As always, I'm thrilled when I see more.

Thank you for the update~. Your Iruka really feels quite Iruka-ish. Your Kakashi is also pretty cool. I like the compromise and Kiba's reaction to praise.

Wow. Lots of moving parts in this chapter. I'm glad that Iruka will be taking on raising the feral Ranmaru.

I can't help thinking that the time is passing very quickly; how much longer does Naruto have?