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Hi Mannah. It's been a while since I chacked in. A lot of stuff happened that kept me away. Things are still rough but I hope that soon everything will go back to normal. Anyway, I finally had a chance to catch up and I'm so glad that Shika and Haru are back home. I actually chacked on the link and saw the amazing pic og the two together in captivity. Kyubbi is very talented. I asked him if he could make some more for your universe so I'm hoping that he would do more. I'm particularly interested in one of Naru and Sasu in full Uchiha regalia, Sasuke as The Uchiha head and Naruto as his Champion and partner. With the way he draws it would ne amazing. So let's keep our fingers crossed and hope for a favorable outcome.

The story has come so far and so beautifully. When I am reading tons of stuff pop into my head that I wish I had a redorder in my mind to catch every single thought. I love where the story has gone. I find Naruto's character so complex and enthralling. I would've been pissed at Shika for not protecting Haru enough and very jealous of the closeness between the two which I know it is more than justified but I am possessive like that. Dunno where I get from but is a huge flaw in my character.

I am glad that Ranmaru will have a chance for a better future with Uchiha and especially thankful that Iruka is going to take him in. That is going to be very good for him. I also loved tha part about Kiba realzing his mistake and fixing it. He is another great character in this story.

Well, that is it for now and I hope to be able to read the next chapter soon. Tkake care and thank you.

Sincerely


Moonmoore

Hello! I am sorry that I was expecting a reply. I am not used to AFF yet, as I spend more time on y!gal and FF. My e-mail is tipcdragon@gmail.com, and I would be honored to hear from you. I would also like to be added to your mailing list for new chapters.
I love this chapter and how everyone is coping with Ranmaru. I must admit, I do harbor some hope that he will grow into a person similar to his clone. I admit, I was not able to get this story out of my head all day, and I blame you for the classes I cannot remember.
Best Wishes,
~Nemo-Hime

I am still engrossed in this story. I went back and reread it from the beginning and I enjoyed it as much as the first time around! I think that what you have done to these characters is brilliant. They have evolved from the anime and become your own. I cant wait to read more about The Uchiha and Akatsuki. I am curious will we ever learn more about Naruto's past? If not, the story is fine as it is. Thanks for writing and sharing this!

I love it when this story is updated. It is such a vast world and I think its amazing how Naruto and Sasuke have so many kids! This story is the Best!

That chapter was wonderful! I was so there in every moment!! I didn't see it coming? That Iruka-sensei would want to raise Ranmaur. That was brilliant! No one better. Now just to get Kakashi on board:) Then the den issue wOw! Thank goodness Kiba realized his err and fixed it. I do see where Kiba was coming from but To-chan has to feel comfortable:) You know I love it that the little-est Naruto has strong lungs:) When all the kids got into the snug even Hikaru that was just so precious:) Oh Great Queen of the Naruto Space Universe I loved it all! The tittle was marvelous ^_^

hi, this is kaname_luvr from ff!!!
omg!!! i felt insulted when you made the distinction between purebreds and hybrids!!! that was like racisim or something!!! yes thats how into the story i am, so yeah no more racisim amongst the litter!!! though im still loving this story!!!

I am not going to lie to you. Reading this chapter made me hate you just a little. As unfair as that sounds, it is the mark of a truly great writer; to make someone care so much about a character that their death hurts. I am going to read on... and hope that he comes back, even though I know he can't. I keep telling myself, maybe... but I know that it wont happen. I am sorry that my first review to you was in sadness. This being said, I have spent the past two days and nights reading your stories. I didn't sleep at all the first night I found them. I am such a hopeless romantic, and I keep telling myself that Ran-kun will come back and they will fix Naruto so that he will live as long as Sasuke. I hope that I am right. I truly do. Please, continue these stories with everything in you, they are breathtakingly beautiful.
Tearfully yours,
~Nemo-Hime

All caught up, yay! Fantastic... the reunion and the shift in relationship between Haru and Shika and then Shika and Naruto, so well developed and written.
What more can I say but keep on writing. You so rock!!

Hello again. I am happy to say that I am not looking through tears to write this review. Thank you. I would also like to say that I never really hated you. I hope you know I was just very sad. And to address the author's note at the bottom of this chapter, I would like to formally plead, beg, pray, wish, hope and offer any of my services you may wish, including acting as an extra beta, testing my very limited writing skills, even more limited art skills, a friend, or someone to bounce ideas off of, that Rin and/or Kotohime find some way to help Naruto live as long as Sasuke. I understand that my views and wishes probably mean very little to you, but I have to try. I would also like to bathe you in love for Haku, who might be my favorite character. And also for giving Ranmaru back, albeit in a round about and beautifully clever way. I can tell you with no uncertainty that you are incredibly talented. I can also tell you that I know many people on y!gallery who would worship you, including me. I know posting all of this there would take a long time and be lots of trouble, but please think about it. I can't help but hope that you will read this review and reply. I hope even more that we could grow to be friends. I would love to talk to you about your talents. But I understand if that is just to creepy for words.
Thank you for reading my review and for being amazing.
~Nemo-Hime

Hiya girlie, i liked this chapter and im going to leave a longer review later. I have a flight to catch at 6 so i need some sleep.

ja ne till laytar