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person richon
schedule March 13, 2011 at 12:00 AM
they are finaly together!!! konohamaru know about ranmaru, he will be able to educate the new one. I want to know how the new babies will be. see you soon . love this story so much !!
schedule March 12, 2011 at 12:00 AM
keep doing what you're doing. I assure you. It's working. It'll be interesting to see how they tame a feral child... who's going to do it? Especially with the extra babies around?
person cynaga
schedule March 12, 2011 at 12:00 AM
[ch.66] Delicious chappy~!!!
schedule March 12, 2011 at 12:00 AM
More babies! What a brood!

I am so glad that Shikamaru and Haru are back with their family.

YOur fan art is amazing, by the way.
person roro237
schedule March 12, 2011 at 12:00 AM
You totally blow my mind when you do the children together!! That was wonderful and amazing!!! I loved it:) I gotta tell what else I loved. To-chan spending the morning with Haru and the way Haru was loving it! I bet you're so surprise that was it:) The decisions that Sasuke made all day showed just how much he's grown as the leader and father. I do love Sasuke! The stuff he was thinking about Yu-chan was so parental and sweet. Hey I checked out the picture it was fantastic! ^_^
schedule March 12, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I love how complicated the story is and the open doors in the plotlines. It makes for better reading and the unexpected. I can never thoroughly guess what will happen next. Its way better than the soap operas I use to watch when I was younger. Lol.
person kanazerosukenaru
schedule March 12, 2011 at 12:00 AM
chappie66 review

okay so maybe i can agree about the quality of life being just as good as the quantity in some instances. yeah naruto has had a good life with sasuke and it will continue to be good for however long he lives it, but i still can't help but want them to live a happily ever after.

I also can't help but be annyoyed by the way sasuke is acting like a jealous lover over shika.

seriously? he is worried about shika meeting klenn? come on sasuke you owe the man, and shika has proven himself loyal, it's not like klenn would take him away from uchiha he knows shika is happiest acting as sasuke's primary advisor, and staying behind with haru.

i'm excited about the new babies, i hope everyone adust to the new additions to family. omg and the whole "you're not my leader" thing that happened between haru and hikaru was awesome...if that was not a moment of one sibling telling the other who he thought was going to be the leader, i don't know what was....LOL...but there are 3 more sibs coming into the picture,and haru may meet his match in one of them....who knows minato was a genius and i'm assuming minato was probably the human that naruto got his human genes from....anyway...i digress into my own imagination....so i loved the whole "brotherly make up session" between the two boys, but i was sad to hear how hikaru interpreted his papa's admonishment....i hope he gets that straightened out...he reminds me more and more of an old itachi every time he has a fight with haru. maybe uncle itachi needs to step in and give guidance on how to love a little brother....and how to serve a little brother.

i liked this chappie, and i'm still on the save naru campaign...narusasu is my favorite all time pairing, and it would be hypocritical of me to say otherwise....i know this is YOUR story but i can still express MY opinions, and i know YOU appreciate them even if other's don't.

thanks for sharing and for all the work and effort you put into entertaining your readers...that is why you have such a loyal fanbase.... :)
person xxShadowheartxx
schedule March 12, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh, I hope Sasuke will be kind to Hana and the Zetzus. If/when they find them.

I love this story so much, it's the highlight of my day.
person v
schedule March 12, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I love that they are all back together, I also see how much this has changed Haru, Shika, and Naruto. I'm wondering how the feral child Ranmaru will effect the family and how different he will be. The small glimpse of Hikaru and Haru's relationship was very welcome, I was worried about how they interacted with each other but now I think that brothers in general have complicated relationships and due to their intelligence and way they are raised theirs just started sooner but still, there's love :) Klenn and Shika interacting in person, something to look forward too :), and how will Neji deal with that? Now to address your author note...you are making me nervous...yes, quality is important..to love and live, happy days are the best...i'll cry if anyone we love dies...i just want you to know. I don't expect it to change the things that occur but I feel that you should be aware of cause and effect..just saying.. ;) lol
person Kat Saama
schedule March 12, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Amazing as usual keep it up! I personally find your writing style brillant I love it, as it's unusal to a certain degree as you have so many different characters! Sorry never reveiwed the last chapter my internet was down but so glad that Shika and Haru are back safe and mostly sound. Again keep it up and can't wait for the next chapter. Don't change, keep with whatever feels right for you! :)