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I don't think that I could be like Naruto and just squash my jealousy of someone else taking my place. But I love it all the same and your explanations of why just blow my mind. This story is really cathartic. Every emotion that the characters have I get little symptoms of too and I enjoy it, way more than movies. OMGosh and the line in the beginning where Sasuke was like Naruto looked like he was getting ready for a race, made me chuckle to myself. There was so much going on and it was all GREAT!! that I know I'm leaving stuff out. Once again great is what you and your beta are. You make my college life SO much better. THANKS

ja ne till next time and keep up the awesome work.

P.s your character development is AWESOME, but in the back of my mind I keep on thinking that sometime in the future Naruto wont be there to be the glue of the family...

I am so glad that they are finally home and that Naruto was able to see and accept his jealousy and realize so beautifully that he has 13 children and shika only has one. They can share Haru. That was wonderful. What I really dont like, or understand I should say, is that you continually allude hint that Sasuke and Shikamaru find each other attractive and cling to each a little longer than they should at times. Although it is very obvious that Sauke is very much in love with Naruto. I dont get this. they didnt do any of this before Naruto came into the picture. Sausuke was frigid and cold and Shikamaru was awkward and strange. so what now, Naruto comes along, changes sasuke for the better, becomes best friends with Shika and changes him for the better also and in the end shika and Sasuke end up together? I kinda feel like thats the horrilble/happy build up that you are trying to give us here. because you even mentioned with neji that neji himself even realized that he wasnt enough for shika anymore but the people that were right for him were all taken. For the moment. And we all know that Naruto only has another 15 years on him and thats it. I was really hoping that you were going to save your readers the heartache of naruto dying and solve the BARA HYBRID msytery for us and somehow that would save naruto for us but it really looks like that is some serious wishful thinking. I guess I just really want Naruto to be saved here. Dont get me wrong, I have cried through some character death here. It made the story flow and I mean it really made these characters feel like they were your friendes and to just up and loose them like that and just feel it and have to re-read that scene over and over again, you know your author is amazing and has you hook line and sinker. But as a reader, who knows that author cant please everyone and please themselves at the same time, the only thing that I the reader can do is ask..........please dont kill Naruto off. Please find a way.......in your wonderful infinit wisdom.......which is pretty vast to have come up with this plot, please find a way to extend his life and have him grow old with sasuke. Have their kits grow up and have full lives. It will probably have to involve orochimaru because really, why is he still alive? he was dead! he probably knows a trick or two and will pop up in the future. Klenn could be on the Bara trail too but please let Naruto live. I'll start a campaign if I have to. Oh yes I will. Dont you make me!!!!!!! :D

OMG I'm totally joining prettypurpletiger's campaign to save Naruto.

No ShikaSasuke or SasukeShika please....NO NO NO!!!

I don't understand Sasuke's attraction to Shikamaru's "vulnerability", I just can't reconcile their friendship with attraction. If you are not going to save Naruto, please at least solidify Neji and Shika's relationship. Shika supposedly loved Neji so much that he was willing to play submissive which was not a role he was comfortable with, and now all of a sudden we are supposed to believe that he would play that role for Sasuke, who he has never admitted to beign in love with??

This is only the second time I've really disagreed with one of your plot twists....both the Haru situation and the Shika/Sasuke thing kinda make me sad....but I'm still going to keep on reading!!

Yet another excellent chapter, you truly are a gifted storyteller.

I think it is awesome that Naruto could get past his personal issues and just be thankful that someone was there for his son when he needed it and that they are both home and safe.

[ch.65] Fluffy family reunion at its BEST! Thanks so much for this chapter!!!

IMPORTANT POST SCRIPT: Feel free to kill any character you see fit (including Naruto) - it's YOUR story.

ShikaxSasuke after the fact sounds nice to me...

Could you hear me squealing and giggling with joy?:) When I read the tittle I went straight to Yea Baby woo!! I got a kick out of Naruto at the air lock:) That was so him! It was a good thing Sasuke had that talk with Naruto about they're one family not us or him. I LOVED everything in this chapter! The hug and I missed you from Sasuke was the icing on the cake:) Wow now what lies a head for Shika and Haru as far as getting back to normal?! I'm so happy that they're home! Oh and Neji is right Shika shouldn't keep asking Haru that question. ^_^

OH, that tugs at my heart. I am so glad he they are home and their family is whole again.

Now what?

That's so sad :( Can't wait till Shika & Haru is back. Already the dynamics of Shika, Sasuke & Naruto's relationship with Haru is going to be interesting. Maybe that's what Naruto is mourning for?