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by mannahpierce

person Dorkchic
schedule March 6, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Poor Naru. He is like those people who handle everything and stay strong and controlled in a crisis. The person who is everyone else's shoulder and finally collapses after everything is over. It is like the only thing that was keeping them going all that time was the fact that there were people depending on them and there were things that needed to be done.

I am especially looking foward to Haru's reunion with the rest of the children. I think the situation with Shikamaru being more of a parent to Haru will work out fine. It will probably be a little compllicated at first, but eventually they will realize that Haru just happens to be fortunate enough to have three parents who love him with everything they have.
person Kat Saama
schedule March 6, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Amazing keep it up! Poor Naruto! Cant wait for the next chapter ^^
schedule March 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
poor Naru. sniffles.
person xxShadowheartxx
schedule March 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Aw, poor, poor Naruto. I hope Haru and Shikamaru come home soon and then they can de-pod the other children.
person roro237
schedule March 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
OMG! This chapter was breath taking!! Now that Shika and Haru are safe all the fear and worries are coming out in Naruto. Just when I think I couldn't love him anymore you step it up and I fall even harder for him:) But he has a breaking point to and I think fluffy soft has let it come out thank goodness! He has been strong for Sasuke Neji and all who needed it. Hey listen to me I'm defending Naruto to you:) You can just call me that silly girl:) I loved this chapter! I didn't have a nose bleed because Sasuke was so worried something wasn't right. Boy was he right! The main thing is their all right and will soon reunite. There's so much to look forward to in your story for me! The other point I loved so much was Haru said Hello to To-chan first. Once again Naruto is the first light seen at the end of the tunnel:) ~Bowing~ Thank you for another day in the life of Naruto Space Universe ^_^
person v
schedule March 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Poor Naruto, I feel like he's been so strong thru everything that happened so this chapter made me very teary. I just know i'll be going thru boxes of Kleenex when he's reunited with Shi-chan and Haru, even though I think we'll see a whole new behavior from him when he see's Haru's scars. I'm still worried that they won't make it home, but I do agree with Neji's opinion that Shika has changed, and also his relationship with Haru has deepened, and I wonder how that will affect their relationships with their family. Most especially Sasuke, Naruto, and the children. Definately can't wait until the next chapter. Also, so many reason to thank the author (u) for Kiba, we'd be lost without him :)
schedule March 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
OMG I feel Naruto's pain. And I can't imagine I'd be any less feral if someone had taken either of my babies from me.

I hope everything is back to 'normal' again for them too.
schedule March 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
emotions are strung high and it's great that you showed that a life change like a kidnapping will do this.
it's interesting that you have Naruto fractured in this way that his responses change with his personality.
oddly I still feel the most for Negi and his uncertainty. the true for all reunion will be very interesting indeed.
but I don't think things will ever be quite the same again:)
person lonelylulaby
schedule March 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh my goodness, I have no idea what is going to happen when everyone is reunited. I was about to start crying at work when I found out that Naruto had built a mourning nest. (T_T) Poor Naruto, he has too much on his shoulders sometimes. Shika needs to hurry up and get back so he can help Sasuke decipher Naruto's inner mind. Gah and about the kits and their little quirks, I wonder which if any they will develop. I think that will be a funny time, unless they bond to someone cruel, like Sasuke was thinking. OmG, there is more I wanted to say but I'm forgetting in my distress, I believe I will have to review again

ja ne till next time and keep up the good work
person richon
schedule March 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
poor naru, i feel sad for him but don't worry you will see shika, haru an the other children soon. Love this story. see you soon