rate_review Reviews

Great story. I'll be on the edge of my seat (figuratively) until we find out more about the people, clones and prints on Pein's ship.

This chapter was even more nerve wrecking than the last, Shika's silly behavior kind of diffused the tension. Poor Naruto. He will be better when his family is all together again. Thanks for uploading. I really love this story.

I stumbled upon this story and have read from the beginning to its current state. The storyline you have developed, from "In the cold of space..." to "Tales in Tarrasade" to "Iteration", is beyond wonderful in its complexity, depth, and richness. The cast of characters at first seems too large, but I think you deftly make sure that not one personality or life gets lost. I did not think that I would maintain interest in such a long story that spans over 120 chapters, but you breathed such a life into these characters and their new world that grips from the beginning and leaves me curious for more. I am especially curious to see what is next for Haru and his adventure.

As a reader, I wanted to extend my thanks for sharing this story and offer a small bravo from my corner of the reading world. I look forward to the next installment.

This story is becoming more and more deep. I love it.

Holy Crap, was not expecting that. I didn't know who it was cause you can't hear voices when you read. So I really wanted to know. GAH!!! they are back together again. Now they just have to make it back onto the Oak safely *knocking on wood* GAH, another great chappi thanks


ja ne till next time and keep up the great work

I just wanted to add that I am TOO stocked (sp?) right now. don't even know if I spelled that right

ja

So sneaky!! I know a cliffhanger when I see one, I'm not calm at all..anything could go wrong at this point!! Just when were all so ecstatic..BAMMO!!..where's haru? What happened to Ranmaru's print? Where's the ship with all the clones? Is that even Shika? or is it some weird clone/drone that Pein made??!!..You see!! You see what you've done to a calm, otherwise normal person like myself....i really love this story...
...please hurry with the next chapter :) lol.

shipping himself as freight... brillient and utterly hillarious. kudos.

whoohoo... whats in the box? or is that who?

Okay. I can breath now. Shika is back and with Neji. I couldn't take the stress much longer.