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Wow! I can't beleive what a great story this is. I'm not talking just fan fiction either. I read alot and I so appreciate a really good read. This is by far one of the best stories I have ever read. You made me laugh, cry, and sit on the edge of my seat trying to read just a little faster. Sorry I haven't reviewed before this but, I just couldn't stop reading long enough to. So......now that I have to wait for another chapter, I thought I'd get off my ass and tell you what a talented writer you are. Keep it up! I look forward to reading more of your work and seeing how the story turns out. Thank you (both) for all the hard work you've put into this.
Aloha,
smauigirl

poor ranmaru but i think sasori will be good for him and it's great they got feral ranmaru even if they have a hard time with him. He deserves a chance at a good life and it will help konohamaru i think too. looking forward to more

I'm so happy they've escaped but I'm still holding my breath..anything could happen. I also feel so sad for Ranmaru's print..it is hard to remember that he isn't "that" Ranmaru, however I am a little distracted from that by the original eight year old Ranmaru , thats going to be interesting I think. I'm hoping Shika and Haru get home safe, its been so long already, I just can't predict anything at this point but I do believe that is what keeps me so attached to the storyline along with the fact that the characters themselves are so fantastic they practically live in your head. :) lol..cudos to small fox for being your muse and for all the support he or she's given to you, we all appreciate it! :)

ranmaru is a good print, too gentle and realist of his good. I have looking forward to know how the uchiha household will react when tey will know they escape. love your story!! see you soon

I read this chapter twice. I like it that much! Do you think you will ever do a side story of Ranmaru with Sasori?

I'm sad for Ranmaru but I think he made the right choice. I just hope that things will turn out as best as they can be. Can't wait to see how the actual Ranmaru will integrate to the household!

Your story is amazing dont change a thing! Just keep doing what your doing please! I've been following your story for months but never reviewed or anything like that because I'm bad at them and I usually dont know what to say. But just to let you know I love your story and please just keep going in the direction your going I love it, it's so orginal with so many characters and setting I just simply love it! Would it be possible also if you could send us an email when the next chapter is out just I do leave it open on my tabs and check it daily so it would be much easier thanks!
Kat Saama

Uchiha for the win! I do hope pein comes around, for his offsiders sake, so many will be miserable if he keeps it up.

i real,ize i haven't commented for a bit, but that was cause i hadn't read it for a bit. I hate being left hanging and this was definately a hanging situation. At any rate I'm back and Mannora sama, once again i bow in awe of your story telling skills. The essance of Uchiah and Naru's influence has struck again. Hana, the Zetsues and Sasori being swung in Uchiha ish tought directins... inspired. But now they'll be sad... and poor Ranmaru, man did he get shafted. hopefully they can do something or he can say goodbye at least. It'll be interesgting to see how you deal with all these plot bunnies you've joyously bred. Also ty again for your regular updating. ^^

I was thinking that Ranmaru would probably stay with Sasori instead of going back to Konohamaru. Wow! I'm shocked I got it right! LOL Thanks for more of this incredible story. I look forward to the next update!

[ch.62] I am completely enraptured by the details of the escape and have forgotten that I initially thought that it was too easy. ;) Really, I have to mourn at the end of these chapters because I have to leave the Iteration Universe again...

Yay! Shikamaru and Haru are getting away. Those poor babies, I hope they'll be alright. Oh no, Ranmaru can't stay behind, it won't be the same without him.... Update as soon as you can. :D