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February 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I couldn't wait to see how the tittle worked in the story:) It is so sad to think about all the life developing on that ship. Because of Pein. But some happiness came when Shika said they would raise the real Ranmaru:) You and the technical side of this story is simply amazing! The real question is how in the world do you think of it?! The clones mindprints wOw! As much as I disliked Klenn D, he has been a much needed allie:) Oh Great Queen of the Naruto Space Universe another magnificent chapter! Thanks of two again this week ^_^
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February 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHH, if I wasn't in a public place right now I would just start bawling my eyes out. I don't want Ranmaru to be left be hind, "no child left behind act" I wonder what Shika will do with the ship and fetuses. Also THANKS SMALL FOX!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! for betaing. Can't wait for another great chapter to come. GAH! all your characters just come alive, and grow. I don't want to c them go. I'm goin t miss THIS Ranmaru too. Another thing is who is goin to take care of the 8 yr old Ranmaru? Kono-kun, probably not. I would be too much. this is getting me to think. There are soo many diverse characters in this story and I really enjoy it. I'm glad that you follow your muse. If other ppl don't like it, they can click the back button.
ja ne till next time and keep up the good work
ja ne till next time and keep up the good work
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February 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Wow, even the reprint is making the sacrifices! His essence will grow up to be a fine person.
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February 25, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Okay, never reviewed a story here so you can be my first. I have read all the stories you have posted, and I have to say they are some of the best I have ever read. I leave the review for the whole story below.
All right, to start 'In the Cold of Space You Find the Heat of Suns' was one of the first stories I ever read on FanFiction.net. It's actually what made me want to start writing. I was always a nerd/geek and sci-fi was one of my favorite subjects. So I started looking for good fic's like that. I was disapointed for the most part, and then I found your story. The whole thing had me drooling for more, I think I ended up reading the whole thing in four days. Now back when I read this story I didn't feel comfortable leaving comments on other people's work, so I never reviewed anything. As my knowledge of writing grew, so did my comfort-level, and I started reviewing thing more often. Now, by this point in my life, I review everything I read. Because I know now, that there is almost no greater feeling then reading what someone else thinks of your work, that, on some occasions, you spend hours writing. So, when I saw that was a sequel, I knew I was going to make up of not reviewing one of the best stories I had ever read. So now that I've finished that, onto the actual story review.
'Iteration' is currently meeting all the wonderful expectations I had put on it from reading your first story. I like how you made one-shots to bridge some of the time gaps so that the children would be older and more interesting to both read and write. I love how you seem to have little stories inside your stories, like all the stuff about Ranmaru and Sickler. It gave the story more depth. I was so, so sad what you killed off poor Ranmaru, but I like the way in which you did it. It wasn't gory, nasty details, but it did leave enough information to make your heart stop in shock and start feeling the need to cry.
I love the way Itachi, Kisame, and Haku's relationship works, it seems very realistic and well thought about. I also love the fact that you didn't kill off Itachi, although so many people do, because he is one of my favorite characters.
I also like the way the Hybrids are. And the fact that they are not all perfect like Naruto. I especially like them because they remind me of my childhood and some of the better days in highschool. If you want to know why feel free to ask, but if you don't care I won't tell you. Anyway, continuing.
I like how the Akasuki appear in here, especially the Zetsus. Who, now from the end of time possibly, will be known as Inryoku and Enerugi, to me at least.
As for some of the things covered in the last chapter. I think the story is perfect, people who don't like it will just have to deal. I actually like the fact that the story revolves around lots of different characters, it makes it interesting.
Anyway, that's my very long review telling you the I totally love and adore your story and I hope you continue it. I hope it didn't turn out too obsessive and stalker sounding.... -_-
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Personal review of chapter 61.
Oh, I hope Shikamaru, Haru, and Sasori get away safely. Neji needs Shikamaru badly. Yay! for Hana and Inryoku/Enerugi, I give them all kisses. *smooch*
All right, to start 'In the Cold of Space You Find the Heat of Suns' was one of the first stories I ever read on FanFiction.net. It's actually what made me want to start writing. I was always a nerd/geek and sci-fi was one of my favorite subjects. So I started looking for good fic's like that. I was disapointed for the most part, and then I found your story. The whole thing had me drooling for more, I think I ended up reading the whole thing in four days. Now back when I read this story I didn't feel comfortable leaving comments on other people's work, so I never reviewed anything. As my knowledge of writing grew, so did my comfort-level, and I started reviewing thing more often. Now, by this point in my life, I review everything I read. Because I know now, that there is almost no greater feeling then reading what someone else thinks of your work, that, on some occasions, you spend hours writing. So, when I saw that was a sequel, I knew I was going to make up of not reviewing one of the best stories I had ever read. So now that I've finished that, onto the actual story review.
'Iteration' is currently meeting all the wonderful expectations I had put on it from reading your first story. I like how you made one-shots to bridge some of the time gaps so that the children would be older and more interesting to both read and write. I love how you seem to have little stories inside your stories, like all the stuff about Ranmaru and Sickler. It gave the story more depth. I was so, so sad what you killed off poor Ranmaru, but I like the way in which you did it. It wasn't gory, nasty details, but it did leave enough information to make your heart stop in shock and start feeling the need to cry.
I love the way Itachi, Kisame, and Haku's relationship works, it seems very realistic and well thought about. I also love the fact that you didn't kill off Itachi, although so many people do, because he is one of my favorite characters.
I also like the way the Hybrids are. And the fact that they are not all perfect like Naruto. I especially like them because they remind me of my childhood and some of the better days in highschool. If you want to know why feel free to ask, but if you don't care I won't tell you. Anyway, continuing.
I like how the Akasuki appear in here, especially the Zetsus. Who, now from the end of time possibly, will be known as Inryoku and Enerugi, to me at least.
As for some of the things covered in the last chapter. I think the story is perfect, people who don't like it will just have to deal. I actually like the fact that the story revolves around lots of different characters, it makes it interesting.
Anyway, that's my very long review telling you the I totally love and adore your story and I hope you continue it. I hope it didn't turn out too obsessive and stalker sounding.... -_-
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Personal review of chapter 61.
Oh, I hope Shikamaru, Haru, and Sasori get away safely. Neji needs Shikamaru badly. Yay! for Hana and Inryoku/Enerugi, I give them all kisses. *smooch*
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February 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
yeah!
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February 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Yay for Zetsu(s)! Too bad he (they) couldn't go along.
Nice story; this recent arc has been pretty interesting to me. I'll admit to being one of the people who doesn't love the extended cast, but your storytelling is very good and as long as it centers on the Naruto-immediate people, I'm good. Like you say, I skim over the rest. Though, I would really love to get a window into what's going on with Gaara and Lee...they've caught my attention and we haven't seen them in awhile.
Oh, and as a side-note, I think it's really sad that people are so hung up on Sasu/Naru or Naru/Sasu. Your habit of having them switch it up is so much more realistic to same sex 'ships...and hot for that matter. :) The whole static seme/uke thing is such a hetero-normative, stereotypical idea that it's pretty insulting...and, of course, it's rampant in fanfic (esp. those written by women). Not that preferring one sexual position over another doesn't happen, but generally has little to do with height, weight, desire to cook, etc, etc. So, go you for showing bedroom equality and creativity. (sorry, mini-diatribe, but it's such a pet peeve...so I'm doubly happy that your characters avoid the trope.) :D
Nice story; this recent arc has been pretty interesting to me. I'll admit to being one of the people who doesn't love the extended cast, but your storytelling is very good and as long as it centers on the Naruto-immediate people, I'm good. Like you say, I skim over the rest. Though, I would really love to get a window into what's going on with Gaara and Lee...they've caught my attention and we haven't seen them in awhile.
Oh, and as a side-note, I think it's really sad that people are so hung up on Sasu/Naru or Naru/Sasu. Your habit of having them switch it up is so much more realistic to same sex 'ships...and hot for that matter. :) The whole static seme/uke thing is such a hetero-normative, stereotypical idea that it's pretty insulting...and, of course, it's rampant in fanfic (esp. those written by women). Not that preferring one sexual position over another doesn't happen, but generally has little to do with height, weight, desire to cook, etc, etc. So, go you for showing bedroom equality and creativity. (sorry, mini-diatribe, but it's such a pet peeve...so I'm doubly happy that your characters avoid the trope.) :D
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February 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
GAH!! I feel so bad for the Zetsu's. I don't want them to be lonely. T_T Anywho another great chappy and I wonder what everyone is going to say when they get back. AAAAHHHHH I just screamed like a justine bieber fan.
ja ne till next time and keep up the greeeaaat work
ja ne till next time and keep up the greeeaaat work
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February 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
yeah the escape with little help of everyone!!! i am so happy !! the uchihahousehold will be too. Love your story the way it's , don't change anything and stay with your orignal plot !!! craving for more , see you soon
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February 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Yay! Escape! Now let's hope they make it back to Uchiha intact.
LOL what will Shikamaru have to do for Klenn Darrent after this?
LOL what will Shikamaru have to do for Klenn Darrent after this?
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February 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
[ch.61] Too easy. Let's see what happens now...