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by mannahpierce

person The Horseman of Death
schedule February 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
go ranmaru shikamaru and haru... maybe sasori now you can all do the happy dance.
schedule February 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
That was betther than watching and episode of 24! I was clenching my jaw and everything waiting to see what was going to happen. you are so amazing! The storyline is so diverse that it just makes you love the characters more. Yeah, I would like to see more sasuke/naruto but you give the readers soooo much with this story that when we do get some naru/sasuke we just do the happy dance. I wonder if you will ever solve the Bara hybrid mystery for us though? But this was just so fantastic! They are going home! Haru will get to see his New brother and sisters born if there are no more problems, Klenn will go ape s... on pein now that Shika is safely out of his grasp ans Neji will Sjika a ring now that he sees how it is to be without him. I cant wait till saturdays "episode"
person SidonieStarr
schedule February 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Great story line! Interesting that they escaped with mindprint equipment.
person Dorkchic
schedule February 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I actually guessed what had happened with the control panel before you revealed! I have no idea why I am so excited by that, but I feel as if I have accomplished something. It is sad when I think of what Pein might do to Hana for letting them go. Also sad to think of what might happen to the Zetsus. Even if Pein does not find out about them- they have lost one of the few people in existence that was not only able, but also willing to understand them. Maybe they can be lured away to work for Uchiha or Klenn? So looking foward to the reunion. Naruto will probably be wrapped around Shika and Haru for days before Sasuke is finally able to pry him off and let him have some time with Neji. Looking foward to the next update. Will Pein persue them? Will there be some form of battle? Will Klenn do something devious? Tune in next time for all this and more! Same Bat-time! Same Bat-channel!
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person satterb
schedule February 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Hurray! They escaped!!!! I hope that the Zetsus will be rewarded somehow, and Hana too. I really like the way your story mirrors the effect canon Naruto has on the people he comes into contact with. LOL Thanks for sharing your wonderful talent with all of us. I look forward to more.
schedule February 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I am saddened with your author's note that not everyone likes all the components of the saga. I love everything about this story, and I'm even open minded to all the pairings and its all amazing. :bows to you:
person jalana
schedule February 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Another wonderful chapter! I'm so glad no one got seriously hurt (or dead!)--even the "bad guys" had started to grow on me a bit. Now back into the Uchiha fold! :)
schedule February 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I'm so glad that Inryoku and Enerugi let Shika & Haru go despite knowing that they might be punished or that they are losing a friend. As for Hana not killing Ranmaru, that's definitely a surprise! :D

Can't wait to read more!
person roro237
schedule February 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh Queenie that was fantastic! I'm still on the edge of my seat! I had my mouth open and didn't even know it till the end:) Your tittle had me hoping this was when they would try but you totally surprised me with the hole escape! Yea baby! I also enjoy all the casts and crew you have in this story of yours. And when it's time for our boys(NarSas)to shine in a chapter I really love it! You know I think it takes all the supporting characters to show just how special the boys are to everyone. I do especially like it when they show each other how special they are:) Thank goodness Ranmaru was saved! I LOVED every bit of this chapter ^_^
person kanazerosukenaru
schedule February 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Again one of my very favorite chapters.

I have to say I was really irritated that you are getting people telling you how to write your story. Those of us who have been following this story from chapter one of ITCS appreciate every single chapter every single character and every single twist in the plot. So ignore everyone else and know that there are many of us out here who love your story just like it is!!!!

Thanks for another update

Kana-chan