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They've escaped!!!! With Ranmaru!! and nobody died!!! and Haru wasn't hurt!! and Hana let them go!!and In-san and En-san helped them because Shika was their friend and they cared for Haru...this is so wonderful...I'm so ecstatic!! Please let them get home...please let nothing horrible stop that from happening...I am worried about Ranmaru though, how long his reprint will last, if they can help him, how he thinks its best if he doesn't come back..that worries me..will he be able to see the family and man that he loves, I already have massive worries about Shika and Haru so this just adds to it all. I'm very stressed...but still happy they escaped and sorta liking and feeling some sympathy for the two Z's now..not two much just yet though. :)

Hi Mannah, I admit I'm one of the few readers who come and go to read a few chapters and may or may not review. To tell you the truth, the story has gone in so many directions that it has turned me off quite a bit. I do enjoy your plot line but I feel that your preference for SasuNaru instead of NaruSasu in the sex scenes was a big factor for me not to read the other chapters. I loved it in the beginning when you made them more equal and when Naruto wasn't afraid to go growly possessive of Sasuke. That was one of the biggest reason that I read this story because it was nice to see a more subdued Sasuke getting take care off. I think you gave a reason why Naruto goes growly soft instead because he was afraid of harming Sasuke but they did so in the beginning and no one was hurt. I think I mentioned this a couple of times and you've tried writing it with Naruto being dominant but it felt like you weren't putting your heart into writing those scenes and instead it felt like you were merely pleasing me and others who like NaruSasu. I know, pairings and who's on top/bottom is a stupid thing to think or talk about but for me, as a reader, that's a big factor in why I'll read a story. Another reason for the fewer interest, was the fact that there are so many characters and children getting introduced in almost each chapter that I forget who's who. Other than that, I did read a few chapters and I'm glad Konan is getting along with Haru. Poor thing for getting hurt, though. Mannah, wasn't sure if I should have written this in a private email to you or something so you can respond but let me know.

poor ranmaru !! i m so sad for him. He is so brave. hope they will escape soon. love your story. see you soon

GAH, why do they have to die soo young. Poor reprint Ranmaru, if only he could find the original, that could maybe help. I don't want to watch him slowly deteriorate..........WAHHHH. Thanks for another great chapter.

ja ne till next time and keep up the good work

In the anime Ranmaru looked like twelve, does that mean Sasori looked twelve too, because imagining him doing all those plotting and killing in an adolescent body with the mind of a thirty-year-old is disturbingly intriguing. Haru's getting scars, I wonder how the other kids going to react to that, maybe Hikaru would get jealous and tried to get himself some battle scars too, haha, I'm totally cheering for Haru and Shikamaru getting back safely and refused to angst about them in capture, and I'm really curious and loving how you will write it up. Thanks for writing, I enjoyed reading it very much.

Comfort was a perfect tittle:) Naruto's comforting was the sweetest! You probably thought I would say that:) But his was! Because he's the 'hug dispenser'! I love that:) Okay I'll admit the comforting by Sasori was very nice. Ranmaru really needed it. I'm with the crew I'm feeling hopefully Shika and Haru will be returning home soon! Another wonderful chapter Oh Great Queen of the Naruto Space Universer ^_^

[ch.60] For a while I was a little frustrated with the amount of characters and different plots going on in the story,the pacing, basically. Frustrated because each one was as fascinating as the next and it never seemed to be enough about each character/situation to satisfy.

But this Shika capture arc has been just right. Deep, interesting characters that you care so much about. You show us their humanity in special ways that draw us right in. The story line with: the Atkatsuki, space travel, prints, data streams, planets with murderous vegetation... is worthy of a top grade Sci-Fi movie experience.

I am a big Sci-Fi fan.When I was a teen that is all I read. I started with Madeline L'Engle's A Wrinbkle in Time and went on to classics such as Dune by Frank Hebert, Brave New World by Aldous Huxley, 1984 by George Orwell and many, many more. I read so much that when I started college I stopped reading fiction because for every 10 books I'd read only one might be excellent.

I tell you this because you have whetted my appetite for great Sci-Fi again - something I never expected from my guilty pleasure yaoi fan-fics. I hope that you are using this as a starting board for your own book. I think even if you just changed the characters name and some of the details, it would be your own. It's a great start and I would love to hold one of your books in my hands one day!

Oh, wow! This chapter was amazing! Ranmaru and Sasori, cuddled in bed, plotting a daring escape together! I love this story so much!

Just wanted to let you know how much I've been enjoying your stories. I really appreciate all your hard work. I'm glad you've made Sasori into someone who can be admired. He's sooo beautiful. LOL

I love this tale..I love it. How brave and selfless of Ranmaru's print, and how frightening these chapters are becoming. I'm scared for everyone, Naruto because he's changed, Neji because his not functioning well, Shika because he's going to do anything to save Haru, and some of the characters I don't like because they're not completely evil, I have no idea whats going to happen next...but I so enjoy the moments you show that I wasn't even aware that I need to know about. I still despise Pein and am disgusted by Konan...so there.. lol:)