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February 19, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Wow! I'm starting to like Sasori! Finally! A chance to possibly escape! Can't wait to read more. Poor Ranmaru :( Great writing as usual. :D Keep up the great work! :D
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February 19, 2011 at 12:00 AM
truly amazing thats all I can say.
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February 19, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I actually cried over this chapter. You have made such a noble character of Ranmaru and I love it. The hopeless romantic in me does hope that it will work out in the end. Maybe Uchiha could find the original or they could start over with the clone and bring him back into the fold like they did the first time. I don't know- I am just wishing for something good for Ranmaru after all of the crap that has made up his life. Thank you for updating so frequently. This has become my daytime soap opera!
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February 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I am so guilty of not doing more frequent reviews. This is another wonderful chapter from you :D I love how things are unfolding & each chapter continues to keep me on my toes! Great writing!
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February 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
HI!!!!!!! I was thinkin that maybe I should put myself on the list for the email, but then I was like... I like to be pleasantly surprised when I check the website and see that you have updated. Thank you for another awesomely wonderful chapter. I really enjoyed the chapter Changes, I wonder what Haru will say when he sees it. Also I wonder what the children will say when they see he has scars. I'm sorta like WTF! with Pein, since he didn't have advanced technology, I wouldn't be able to do it. Anyho enjoyed these chapters and I'll try to review semi-regularly, I have no excuse, just lazy. ^_^
ja ne till next time and keep up the good work
ja ne till next time and keep up the good work
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February 16, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Exciting...things are progressing nicely. I hope this Pein subplot wraps up soon and with a good resolution. I am not a huge fan of danger plots and while they add to the excitement level and all that I would rather read about the rebuilding of the Uchiha, everyone's relationships and watching the family grow especially children. I hope you continue to get the reviews you deserve so that you continue to be motivated to keep writing this story.
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February 16, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Alright! Plot twists!
Who was the print making eyes at Shikamaru? Better not!
That comm method was awesome. But how is it that Shikamaru was the only one who noticed a rhythmic twitching of Sasori's index finger?
Who was the print making eyes at Shikamaru? Better not!
That comm method was awesome. But how is it that Shikamaru was the only one who noticed a rhythmic twitching of Sasori's index finger?
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February 16, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I really love this story, there's so much detail.
I'd been wondering about why the Devas were behaving unexpectedly. It's interesting that it's not even something/one else getting to them, just their convictions.
And pein underestimates the strength of the forces against him. I can't wait to see how this turns out :)
I'd been wondering about why the Devas were behaving unexpectedly. It's interesting that it's not even something/one else getting to them, just their convictions.
And pein underestimates the strength of the forces against him. I can't wait to see how this turns out :)
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February 16, 2011 at 12:00 AM
[ch 59] YES! Help from an unexpected source - Sasori!
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February 16, 2011 at 12:00 AM
YESSS!!! Wonderful! The people the details were brilliant as always:) I loved it ^_^