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oh the situation with pein is more and more difficult, hopefull shi will gain his confidence and they will be back soon the sasu and naru. love your story!!

Alright, Shikamaru! Do it!

This was like watching anime seriously! You covered a lot!! The children in their new big kid room with the bat-poles:) That was so touching how Neji unpacked Haur stuff. I loved it! Of course nothing can compare to our boys in the bed chamber. 'Yea Baby!' The nest building is one of your most amazing ideas and I love it to death:) Because it can be for sex or sleeping. It's so real! I turn into fluffy soft 237 every time fluffy soft Naruto is around:) I have to admit that it sadden me to hearing the number of days Shika and Haur are away from the family. Haur must feel really bad if he was wishing for Rin. That broke my heart. I don't think I've said this in a while I LOVE your story it just keeps on getting better! ~Bowing~ Thank you for your hard work Oh Great Queen of the Naruto Universe ^_^

I am enjoying the interactions between Shika and Atkatsuki so much!

Woot! I've finally caught up! I love your way with words and the vocabulary you use. You string them together as if it's the only way that the story can be written. Every chapter keeps building onto the story and you keep bringing me to the edge of suspense every time. Even though the characters from Naruto are in a different universe, you've made them fit into your world perfectly with your own characters.

Other than being busy with work, I hope to read more chapters from you soon! Keep up your awesome writing and know that as one of your readers, I greatly appreciate your work!

I'm concerned about Haru, I do think pein prefers him ill or hurt in order to control Shika, which of course leads me to believe he should die a horrible painful death. However yeah for the two Z's for standing up against him if only for a moment. I wonder how Naruto will react if he ever finds out haru was injured and scarred? or the rest of Haru's very dangerous family.

OMG!! Haru was injured!! Could of possibly died..someone needs to pay!!They need to go in there and bring the smack down on these people!! Obviously Konan is a complete idiot, and pein is a wackjob..I've decided to no longer find them interesting, one of To-chan's children was hurt!!
Kill them all!!!! :)

Interesting spin on death, cloning.

Excellent chapter.

[Ch.57] I like the word 'print'. It has a different feel to it than 'clone'.

ranamaru is a print it's maid sens and it will help shikamaru to fnd an exit . Still love your story and want more, see you soon