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January 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
ohoho ranumaru is not dead, I love the idear !!!it's awesome; a new ally for the uchiha. Love your fic, see you soon
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January 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
OMG this is breaking my heart. Their family has been torn apart!
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January 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
they retrive 3 chldren , to left,I love this story, I can't wiat for more, what will happen.
see you soon
see you soon
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January 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I'm sorry I'm too lazy to log in but this is Kana-chan, and here is my review
NOOOOOOOOOO It cannot take standards!!! Those Bastards cannot have my favorite baby Haru...they will corrupt his beautiful little mind, and when they find out the level of his genius may be greater than Shika's they will exploit his beautiful mind!! Please Please save him!! Come on Klen do something damn it, you're supposed to be some "bad ass no-one messes with me MOFO" Do something! UGH!!
Yeah that is how that rant went in my head...it's so funny to me how I think your characters are real and they will listen to my ranting madness...LOL.
Anyway great chapter I cried at Hikaru's reaction to saying he had wished Haru gone sometimes. I feel really bad for him, he doesn't understand that it is a part of being Uchiha, the sibling rival is inbred in them. He has a little more old Itachi than Sasuke in him, but at least he acknowledge the jealousy, and is letting his Pappa help him come to terms with his feelings. Something that would have done wonders for old Itachi if he had had a parent like Sasuke. Such a wasted beautiful life....Fugaku was such a bastard! He stole so many years from Sasuke and Itachi by his brutality and hunger for power. I'm glad Haru and Hi-chan will be spared that life....well that is if we get Haru back as Haru. I have faith in Shika's ability to protect his son though....so I'm still hoping for a Happily Ever After.
NOOOOOOOOOO It cannot take standards!!! Those Bastards cannot have my favorite baby Haru...they will corrupt his beautiful little mind, and when they find out the level of his genius may be greater than Shika's they will exploit his beautiful mind!! Please Please save him!! Come on Klen do something damn it, you're supposed to be some "bad ass no-one messes with me MOFO" Do something! UGH!!
Yeah that is how that rant went in my head...it's so funny to me how I think your characters are real and they will listen to my ranting madness...LOL.
Anyway great chapter I cried at Hikaru's reaction to saying he had wished Haru gone sometimes. I feel really bad for him, he doesn't understand that it is a part of being Uchiha, the sibling rival is inbred in them. He has a little more old Itachi than Sasuke in him, but at least he acknowledge the jealousy, and is letting his Pappa help him come to terms with his feelings. Something that would have done wonders for old Itachi if he had had a parent like Sasuke. Such a wasted beautiful life....Fugaku was such a bastard! He stole so many years from Sasuke and Itachi by his brutality and hunger for power. I'm glad Haru and Hi-chan will be spared that life....well that is if we get Haru back as Haru. I have faith in Shika's ability to protect his son though....so I'm still hoping for a Happily Ever After.
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January 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Thank goodness the hybrid children are fine! I loved the happy reunion of them!! Your Sasuke and Naruto are the best!!! I'm so in love with them:) It took longer for me to fall for Sasuke. But now I just adore him:) Queen sorry I mean O Great Queen of the Naruto Space Universe:) This chapter was just wOw! Sasuke picking up on Hi-chan need to talk that was one more thing I loved in this chapter. You covered it all. Even some Neji time:) I haven't misses that you're still spoiling us with two chapters:) Thank you! I hold my breather as I look to see if it's here:) I have to do a 'Yea Baby' for the sweet loving moment at the beginning ^_^
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January 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I'm so happy that 3 of the children are safe and home... although still terribly worried about Haru and Shika..I do not like how the enemy seem to have the Sasuke and his family dancing to their tune by threatening the ones they love..and I don't know if they can trust klenn yet..i'm on the edge of my seat with every chapter.
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January 20, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I'm going to believe in Sasuke..I'm going to believe he can handle this and bring the children and Shika home...I'm going to believe Itachi is a mastermind of horrible things to retrieve their loved ones.. Klenn will come thru like a mighty sword..and that Kakashi will be an unstoppable warrior...I'm going to believe that Shika is awesomely dangerous when annoyed and worried for his son...and no one we love will get hurt.....and if none of that happens...well then...I'll cry, but i'll keep reading.
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January 20, 2011 at 12:00 AM
The Lions roar,
The Mother's cry,
The Father's scream,
The Nighttime silence,
The Loss of The Child causes all these things,
But Fear Not in the dead of night,
When these omens taunt and fright,
The Child is found,
The Mother is comforted,
The Father screams no more,
The Lion sleeps.
author David Blades copyright 2010 all rights reserved Master David Blades
This poem is I think how I would like this story to progress and I have it on the author's authority who I am in regular contact with that the legend this poem was based on had a happy ending. i hope for shikamaru's and haru's sake that this story matches that one and the lion is never even near the child
The Mother's cry,
The Father's scream,
The Nighttime silence,
The Loss of The Child causes all these things,
But Fear Not in the dead of night,
When these omens taunt and fright,
The Child is found,
The Mother is comforted,
The Father screams no more,
The Lion sleeps.
author David Blades copyright 2010 all rights reserved Master David Blades
This poem is I think how I would like this story to progress and I have it on the author's authority who I am in regular contact with that the legend this poem was based on had a happy ending. i hope for shikamaru's and haru's sake that this story matches that one and the lion is never even near the child
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January 19, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This chapter is so heartwrenching and the worse is not yet over. It brought tears to my eyes. I just hope that we don't lose Shika or any of the kids. I really hope KD will aid Uchiha in this quest. Although the situation is very bad, it is very reassuring to see everyone pulling together to help Sasu and Naru. I love when families do that I find it very beautiful. I was really hoping they would at least find one of the kits in one of the pods but I guess it is too soon.
Wonderful chapter as always! Take care and see you next time!
Sincerely
Moonmoore
Wonderful chapter as always! Take care and see you next time!
Sincerely
Moonmoore
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January 19, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I'm so impressed by how well the Uchiha function and how quickly they come together to solve problems. I think Shikamaru would be very proud of how efficiently they have worked together. I cannot wait to see what Klen is going to do. Great Chaptert. Looking forward to more. Oh and I'm also happy to see that Shika is clever enough to know that Itachi is key to the success of any important mission. LOVE IT!