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person roro237
schedule January 19, 2011 at 12:00 AM
WoW! This was so good!! I'm on the edge of my seat untill the next chapter ^_^
schedule January 19, 2011 at 12:00 AM
OMG how exhausting! I hope they win and Shikamaru and the children are returned safely!
schedule January 19, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I have been waiting for this story all week! I feel a little better that they might make it home now because Shika had some plans in the works if something happened to him and sasuke is really using his head. I hadnt even thought about them giving the kits to orochomaru. You are sooo deliciously good with your plots!!! Still hoping and praying that everybody gets hime safely!!!!! pretty pretty please?
person lonelylulaby
schedule January 19, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I hope the retrieval doesn't take standards (that's yrs right). I think I would become depressed and cry a little. Or if one Shika got away and Haru was stuck there. My imagination is running wild here unchecked. Pretty soon I'm going to start hyperventilating. Anywho these chapters have been getting me tru the beginnin of my semester in college. Thank you muches

ja ne till next time and keep up the great work.
person meowkuu2
schedule January 19, 2011 at 12:00 AM
heartbreaking but oh so very cool! I was on the edge of my seat reading this!!!
Thank you for the update I look forward to more!
p.s. Uchiha needs to go 300 on Pein's ass!!!
person meowkuu2
schedule January 15, 2011 at 12:00 AM
..I'm sad.. I hope we'll eventually see a bright light at the end of this tunnel of darknss
...and so much for Naruto thinking that "he'd always choose Sasuke over the kits"...yea.. I remembered that line

he's all gun-ho about firing on them without even stopping to think about if they have the children and I bet you if Sasuke actually did shoot and the kids were hurt he'd hate Sasuke....
person cynaga
schedule January 15, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I hate it when delicate, special people are under the clutches of the enemy! *sigh* :<


my Shika...
person roro237
schedule January 15, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I'm sorry to say the same old things all the time. But omg I can't help it! This is an incredible chapter!! The details and all the people places and things have me in total awe!!! I'm scare and worried about the unknown for Shika and the kids. For Naruto who is going though hell and Sasuke who going though the same thing but has to make the hard decision. This is anime and a new chapter has started and I just want to keep watching two hour specials to see what is going to happen:) Thank you for your hard work. Your story just keeps getting better with each new chapter ^_^
schedule January 15, 2011 at 12:00 AM
*blubbers gratuitously* OMG how brave they are!
schedule January 15, 2011 at 12:00 AM
oh you are killing me!!! killing me!!!!! please let them go home please. I am absolutely begging you to please let them go home. the drama is excellent and the angst is amazing but please, as someone who has been with you through ALL THREE STORIES please let them, all of them, make it home.