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I find myself hoping that everyone's fear of Klen and what the man can and will do to those that cross him are well founded, because once he finds out that Pein has Shikamaru all hell will break lose. I think that man will move heaven and earth to return Shika to happiness. Not to mention that he is a great admirer of the Sasuke/Naruto living legend. He has to intervene, and I hope he makes Pein sorry for trying to bring down and hurt the Uchiha, by way of Shikarmaru.

What Pein does not understand is that the only reason Sasuke is so beloved by the people is because he operates out of love and respect for all living beings, not for the love of power like his father and Pein. What does Pein think he is going to accomplish by taking his children and the voice in his ear away? He is not endearing the people to him, by attacking the Uchiha and his children.

He's such a power hungry idiot, and he is fighting against a person who has already gained legendary status, no one will follow him over Sasuke. If anything comes of this it will be an uprising against anything he tries to accomplish, once the people find out what exactly it is he is trying to do, and what he has done to try to reach his goal of dominating and ruling over the Universe.

Man I hope this story comes to a happy ending, I don't want any of the babies to die.

ahahh it's so sad, i hope nobody will be dead!!! I can't wait for more I am so excited

I knew I did not want to read the next chapters(sniffle) this is horrible!!! What is going to happen to??!! (sniffle, sniffle) They have the children!!! (sob) They have Shika!! (sob,sob) Naruto is upset at Sasuke!! How will that help??!! (wail) I don't like these people!!! Is Neji alive?? I'm not reading anymore!!!!! ....please hurry with the next chapter....(sniffle)

The podding of the children, Shikamaru's thoughts and actions, and Haru's message made me cry. Of course, Naruto's feelings really hit home but poor Sasuke he has so much in his plate right now. I couldn't be in his shoes. It is all so sad. I can't seem to stop the tears. It was a very emotionally charged chapter. I am out of words.

Take care

Moonmoore

I knew pain was going to get to shikamaru sooner or later and now he ends up with Neji and the kids too? Its amazing that I was dreading it/hoping it wouldnt happen and thats only because you are such an amazing writer that you make this story more than a story. You make the reader feel like your characters are real people and you, the reader agonize over what is happening to them. I was torn up about what happend to ranmaru and the whole while that was going on I was really hoping that nothing happened to "my family" but here it is. You are an amazing writer and I am really hoping that sasuke and naruto get the children and Neji and Shikamaru back. It doesnt seem likely since pain would have no reason to let them go except for konan finding out that he killed ranmaru. If they dont get rescued im going to have to skip a couple of chapters and come in a little later after the heartbreak. I know it sounds crazy but you made me fall in love with these "people" and its hard to read about them going through such things. Back to reality...this is an AMAZING story. I really hope that you are writing professionally because this gift that you have of weaving an entire world/universe from your imagination is truly profound!!!!!!!

Are you trying to kill me??!!I wasn't able to review the last chapter cause I just read it...with the new one...my heart is in my throat. I really, really , really don't want to read the next chapters. This is a horrible cliffhanger....I'll be checking everyday for your update :)

ohoho this attak was unexpeexded!!! i love the idear... What sasu will decide, I want more update soon please

[ch. 49] OMG OMG

This got my heart racing. I was waiting for the other shoe to drop & now it has :( Argh! I don't know how they are going to get Shika & the kits back & it's so nerve racking! :( Thanks again for another wonderful chapter.

OMG!!!!!! That was wOw! I was hit by a truck! I didn't see it coming:) I'm ~Bowing~ to the Great Queen of the Naruto Space Universe. I'll be strapping myself in for the next chapter:) I'm so proud of Kazu-chan for protecting his brother. Poor Neji. I can just image how help-less he must feel. Can't hardly wait to read you next time! ^_^