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I love hearing about the children and I am glad that Haru's specialness and the difficulties that come with a highly gifted child hasn't gone away. I think it's something that both Naruto and Sasuke will have to deal with for a long time. Although it seems that Naruto has a harder time than Sasuke. It would be nice to get to know the other children as well as we know Haru, maybe a chapter devoted to each one at some point or it doesn't even have to be that intensive. But I sometimes feel that Sasuke and Naruto have one main child and about nine other little bodies running around. I'm excited about the new babies but I just hope that they don't take what little screen time the other children have already. I always feel like I am waiting for the other shoe to drop with each new chapter which is a mark of good storytelling but it makes me a bit hesistant to read new chapters. Anyway great chapter as always.

[ch.47] How did I get along before I had your lovely work to read? What a delight to dig into these characters psyche!. I love Shika and Haru. And the NaruxSasuxNaru action/love is always appreciated. What fun!

Hi! Happy New Year! Sorry I've been absent. I don't know where to begin as so much has happened. You made me cry with Ranmaru's death and all the while reading the next chapters I has hoping for a sign that Akatsuki had kidnaped him and planted a clone for the gruesome death. They do seem to have the technology. I am very worried for Shika. I hope they figure out soon that he is the target. How do they know so much about Uchiha and the family? I thought Shikamaru protected himself while in the data streams and all info about the individuals that make up Uchiha. I am very confused and a little scared. Does Akatsuki have a type-genuis? That Zetsu seems to be pretty clever, is he a dysfunctional typed-genius? Anyway, I loved the recent chapters. I adored seeing all the children growing up and developing but I am fearful for Haru. He seems so much smarter then Shika it is scary. I hope that he can be protected. I don't even want to think of Pein getting wind of Haru. That would be horrendious. Man, it's getting so complicated for Uchiha. Sasu and Naru are crazy to want even more children with how things are at the moment.

Awesome job as always! You are awesome Mannah! Take care and thank you for the great story!

Sincerely


Moonmoore

Love this story so much!!! What haru will decide, update soon please !!

I love all your chapters but this one was wOw! It had everything in it the kids and lots of incredible sexy stuff with our boys!! Sasuke being a wonderful dad. Calling Naruto to hug Shika was a good one of course the reasons behind it was even better:) I just loved every word of it! You know what's coming:) I have to shout it out 'Yea Baby' so good! You kicked out a bomb in the middle of the week! This is why you are Queen of the Naruto Space Universe. Ok one more time 'Yea Baby' ^_^

I'm very happy with this chapter, i love Naruto and Sasuke as a couple and a family..I also love seeing them manage the ins and outs of their relationship to each other, and their children. Also, to hear Sasuke confess his attraction to Shika!! The ins and outs, twists and turns, old clues and new revelations definately keep me coming back for more :)

God that made me want to cry.

This made me so happy!!!
but then..I have the huge read warning in my head screaming potential hostages of Pein blinking away...
and then Haru..it's like I dunno.. yes Shikamaru has the whole "does-not-understand-the-full-concept-of-right-and-wrong thing" but Haru.. even a child..its like..it almost feels that he's gonna wither do an insane amount of good or his curiosity is gonna led to an insane amount of trouble that can't be fixed at all...

someone really needs to discipline that child
and they need defends soon.. the happier they get the more freaked out i get about something majorly horrible happening to them mew...

thanks for the super update mew!

Well, I guess it really does take a village. I dreamed last night my husband and I adopted eleven newborns - I blame this story!

OMG! That was so awesome!! What in the world did you do with all those kids in your room?:) I loved it! Thank you for all your hard work ~Bowing~ Happy New Year ^_^