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by mannahpierce

schedule January 1, 2011 at 12:00 AM
OMFG more babies! I absolutely love this story!

Thank you, thank you, thank you -- and happy 2011!
person v
schedule January 1, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I love the chapters that are full of the children, getting to see their growing personalities and how the adults cope with the sheer number of them and their needs is always fun :)I think there is going to be some significance to Sasuke deciding on a purebred version of Naruto without the "fox bits", and I'm sure its not just lifespan because the other two girls would have a long lifespan also, but thats all i'm maybe sure about because I never know whats going to happen next, which makes for great reading :) I love to read, even romance books, I always think that even if you know how the book is going to end (in romance books they always end up together) if the author can keep you interested in the journey, they have a great talent :)
person Anon
schedule January 1, 2011 at 12:00 AM
man how i wish that someone would do art for this fiction. those babies are so incredibly adorable, and haru-chan is my very very favorite little uchiha. I can't wait to see what happens when the naru/sasu babies are born. i hope ryu-chan will not feel left out, or like he doesn't belong because he is neither an uchiha or a a naruto hybrid-clone. i love love LOVE this story more and more with every chapter that you put up. Thank you for sharing your imagination with us.
person cynaga
schedule December 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I can't keep the kits straight but I still love reading about them!
person meowkuu2
schedule December 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
noooooooooooooooooooo!!!!
but I'm happy that a confrontation is coming soon...and sad...and scared..
and think that adding more babies to the mix is really really gonna mix things up like wooo...

seriously.. uchiha needsss to step up their game, they need more fighters.. its good being all sympathetic and nice and family-orientated.. but haven't they realized that the more popular they became they stronger they need to be to defend themselves against people who will hate them?????
..by chance.. will we be seeing any more type-seven geniuses or Anbu or Black Ops type people joining forces with uchiha.. i think they're gonna need alot of help pretty soon neh?
schedule December 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Akatsuki plans are most Troublesome. And that prick barstard setting poor Ranmaru up.
person Gaia77
schedule December 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I'm really praying for a happy ending to this one...lol
person roro237
schedule December 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Okay that was amazing! Pein's plan has come out to play. Him calling Naruto a soulless hybrid!! You know I'm out raged:) The children have grown up wonderfully. Which is no small feat:) I'm feeling in awe of you right now. The way you come up with the story line keeping everyone (the characters)in the loop and their growth it's to incredible for words! Hey I love Yuki and Konohamaru coming together that was so sweet. Papa sewing and all the other helping to make the gift so special. You add all the little touches to make this story so real:) Thanks you for the second update:) You are 'The Great Queen of the Naruto Universe' ~Bowing~ ^_^
person v
schedule December 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I'm very worried now..I don't like Pein nor do I like anything he seems to be planning. There is a giant ball of icky in the pit of my stomache.
Ranmaru's death was horrible and we didn't know him that well, I feel like bad things are going to happen the the spacer family we all love...I loved the part with yuki, how everyone helped his gift to Mai be wonderful. I do wonder how Itachi is going to handle fatherhood, he doesn't have that much time left :)
person The Horseman of Death
schedule December 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
well this chapter and the latest tales in tarrasade one were both sad and hopeful i hope that konohamaru and haku get well soon.