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Wha--what? How--what happened? Everything was peachy and beautiful a minute ago. Now everything's gone to hell? What the heck happened? D: It's really late, I don't know how I should sleep now... -crying about poor maru-chan- TT~TT

.....well.. the shit just hit the ceiling...I.. think I'm going to have to slowly re-read this chapter again..
I think I'm still in shock
There's going to be a whole fight/ revenge thing with Akatsuki for Ranmaru I gather?
..damn...
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yea.. still in shock...

OMG that was such a shocker!!

I feel bad for Kono-Kun, but the children will be devestated! Inoichi was one thing, they were not very attached to him, but Ranmaru was an integral part of the family. Poor Haru, I know he will figure out what happened before anyone else does. I wonder how he will deal with it? I can't wait for Shika-kun to find the bastards (Pein, Konan, Akatsuki), and kill them all slowly and painfully. Bastards!!!!!!!!

Woah!!!!!! This took a very unexpected turn for me! The happiness at the beginning & then Ranmaru dead at the end of the chapter. Wow. I feel sad that Ranmaru died. :( The way you wrote the story made me feel like I knew each character & Ranmaru is one of those I liked. Great writing as usual.

ohhoo no ramaru cant' be dead!!! the begin was so happy, the end is sad, too much emotion
see you soon I love it

Oh Mannah...you have me sitting here near tears, staring at the computer screen in shock, all over a fictional character. You certainly don't pull your punches. I don't know what to say about this development. I didn't even know I had liked Ranmaru this much until he was gone forever. This is most likely the beginning of Pein and Zetsu's attack on Uchiha and I am fearful of who we will lose next. I can't imagine how Maru is feeling, he had finally found the person for him and now that person is gone, stolen from him in the most horrific way. I want to say I look forward to what happens next but I am more apprehensive than excited at this point.

OMGosh, that is all I can say.....Ranmaru had grown on me, I can't believe this happened. They were only shopping. :( I wonder how the children are going to take it. And for the longest I was like Konohamaru, i thought it couldn't possibly be tru that it was a clone. But I guess not. Also I'm glad about the babies. But I think I'm in shock, so this is all I've got.

ja ne till next time and keep up the awesome job

First of all I don't know how chapter 42 got by me.(don't roll your eyes at me like that) I didn't see it up really!:) I loved it! You had all those people in your compute room and it was wonderful:) Rins news for Naruto was surprising! Shino and Anko made me laugh. Haku is a pris I think that's him all the way setting in the tent:) Then chapter 43 is when all hell broke loose!! Poor Konohamaru!!! Oh Space Queen of the Naruto Universe I did not see or feel that one coming! This is why you are Queen. You know how to work the bomb ^_^

Oh, that ending was heartbreaking! I had tears in my eyes--poor Konohamaru!

Thanks for the constant updates. They've become the highlights of my week. :) Can't wait to see what happens next!

Happy holidays!

So i dont really have an account here, but i read your other story on ff.net and i been following this ones here
okay on with my review... HOLLY ----- OMG!!! HES DEAD!!! TOTALLY GRUESOME DEATH!!! HORRIBLE!!! im honestly hoping that the ranmaru they found is some sort of fake or something, omg that was horrible!