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Omgoodness, I totally forgot that the kits would die before Sasuke too. Man, that just makes me all depressed again. If they do end up having this mixed baby, will they only have one or more? that is the question. Anywho I really enjoyed the look into all the lives of the couples, I sorda want to know more about Itachi, Kisame, and Haku.

Welps ja ne till next time and keep up the good work

Brave, Strong Uchiha warriors in pink and yellow.. LOL that image is hilarious!
Next thing.. Poor Sumaru.. hopefully he'll find the person for him neh? Every knife needs a sheath right?
I like how Iruka spoke to Naruto, I actually thought of that while I read Rin and Dan's part (and on a side note.. the breaks btw characters is really cute *huggies*)

I look forward to more updates ^_^

My heart is brimming with love & joy. This fic is able to pull so many emotions out of me that it's amazing. YOu should really considering writing & publishing a novel.

I love the previous chapter where Shika build a section of the ship for the kids. I miss the kids! :D

The idea that Sasuke & Naruto can have their kids is intriguing. Can't wait to read more on that!

I don't know why but this chapter made me cry!!!!!!!!
I loved the snow and the family time, it reminded me of Christmas time at home.
Poor Naruto I hope he tells Sasuke they can have a NaruSasu baby together, that will outlive them both.

Oh and is it weird that I want Sumaru to end up with Sasuke if Naruto dies???

Okay, I'm totally blubbering now...

Sometimes I can predict where a story is headed from the plot and actions people take and also from previous story written, I just have no idea what the future holds in each chapter when it comes to your writing and your characters..that alone makes every chapter very exciting to read. I can't wait for the next one...also..I never connected the dots about the childrens lifespan..how sad for Sasuke to know he would not only outlive Naruto but the most of the children as well (sniffle).

WOW! I love this story so much! I normally don't start a story that isn't finished yet because I hate waiting but the first story was finished. I was tricked! *fake glare dissolves into laughter* You are a really great writer. The characters come alive when I'm reading it and I have cried several times already and stayed up 48 hours reading the first story(with breaks, just no sleep). I feel sorry for Neji's pain and Shika's loneliness, Naruto's issues and Sasuke's problem dealing with those issue. All of your characters have developed so much, it is amazing! I can't wait for the next chapter!

Awww, that was sweet of Shikamaru and the ending too. I really hope that Haru and Hikaru will be able to get along when they grow up. They both are just too smart for their own good.

ja ne till next time and keep up the good work

That was so amazing wOw! I didn't know I had misses their loving so much until this:) My nose is bleeding and my eyes watering. 'Yea Baby' That's what I like:) Naruto comforting Shika was the best. Shika chip off the old block is a rascal. The question he had about the pee-pee showing how long he was peeping:) I hope Hi-chan and Haru will grow out of their rivalry. Sounds like two other people I know:) This chapter is the bomb! After all the fighting and hyebreeds rescue they need this ^_^

you let the characters development be primary and the storyline secondary, wich creates a captivating flow. it is lovely, thank you.