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I understand that, for the purpose of your plot, someone had to die. How did you decide it would be Inoichi? I'm just curious.

wow, I was wondering if you'd put in Sakura as a fangirl and how that would have worked out, but I'm glad that she's not extremely gushy of Sasuke...then...babies..all those kids..like..it's terrifying to think about if Uchiha got attacked at this point with all the kids these people have or want to have...like suppose one of them get kidnapped?

I also extremely love how you use the storytelling as a way to teach the kids things..its been awhile since anyone in real life has done that so to see it in a fic and used properly is awesome

and last..I think I got really upset over the icy cold eyes thing btw Naruto and Sasuke..I mean..I know that Naruto loves the kids but sometimes you have to look at the big picture..He really can't afford to be stressing out about so many things at once..he should have things more organized and its not like Sasuke was suggesting he never go see the kids..just have an alotted time for that and for dealing with the hybrid stuff you know...I feel his extreme foxy love for those kids is eventually going to put him in a bad situation with Sasuke or with some unknown baddies out there...meh

mew mew as always I wait for more updating and thank youuuuuuuuu!!!

Grrr--I love this story! >_<'
Hey--look-it's C-san~! :D I've definitely come to appreciate that guy ^_^b
Man, this story is SO EPIC! :u

Wow, I'm glad that they didn't fight, but I can't help feeling that it was the calm before the storm, seems like Kurotsuchi still have some tricks left. Nice chapter, makes me really happy reading this.

yea!!!!! things are looking up....abit..we still have some foreboding atmosphere there..but as always i very much appreciate what you write and thank you!!!

p.s....just a random thought..is Sumaru going to get with anybody in the future?

That was very neatly handled so far, all things considered. Well done.

I loved the ending of this chaapter so much! I needed that hook-up:) I mean Sasuke and Naruto needed that time together after everything:) For a minute I was afraid for Kiba. I couldn't remember everything he'd done to Orochimaru. Then of course Kakashi with his comment of the little menaces was to funny! You probley guested what my favorite part was oh I said it first didn't I:) Well there's more I loved. That Naruto told Sasa the he was the center of his world and he didn't blink twice when C-san came in. Ok I loved that hold last part every word of it ^_^

This was a great chapter, so happy the hybrids were able to be rescued...the feral children gathered up and how wonderful that we got to see a little more of sickler and his compassion and determination..although I am curious about the elite fighters especially Tatsuji. Excited about getting to see the children again and the reunion between Naruto, Sasuke , and Shikamaru...although I am nervous because sometimes you lead us into a deep sigh of relief only to have the breath punched from our stomach by excitement and imminent danger...somehow O and K will be involved in that I think. lol Still dying to see more of Gaara and Lee and how events that happened have changed their relationship, plus kudos for seeing Iruka's slightly bloodthirsty side..i forget between his mothering and ability to take care of all..that he's still a spacer, thanks for reminding us :)

Yay, more growly possessive Naruto FTW! A very nice way to end the crisis situation. Can't wait to see what is up next for the intrepid crew!

yea!!!! though now I'm afraid and curious of what that woman's actions are going to be and what trouble they'll cause....