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for Time Waits (Complete)

by momhuey8

person moodysavage
schedule September 30, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I loved it loved it loved it!!! That was soooo good!!! If you had made their meeting after the fight much longer I wouldn't have minded that either... but...that was so good! Thanks for writing!!!
person Nami
schedule September 30, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Gosh..... oh my goodness that was cute. I was tearing up quite often. While I wish he could have changed things, Itachi broke me poor heart, he ending was sweet. Two babies, Uncle Kakashi, Naruto winning verbal confrontations about babies? So bloody cute~!
person a kitsunes light
schedule September 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!!! Soooo sad for everyone! Naru, the uchiha brother's....
But I cant wait to read more! I hope sasuke get's to live somehow in the end...
person Anon
schedule September 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Naruto sure has learned to contain himself. I guess all of his experiences have taught him some things. It is gut wrenching for him to know what will happen to those he cares for and feel impotent to do anything about it.
person moodysavage
schedule September 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
ohhhh, I love this so much!!!!!!!!!!! I was so excited when I saw more chapters up!!!!!!! I really love every word of this. Your plotlines are some of the best I've ever read. Thanks so much for sharing!!!
person Anon
schedule September 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I just read the first 3 chapters all together. I have to say that I like the very different perspective this story takes. For Naruto to have the time to see his parents for who they truly are for an extended period of time is most unique.

You do have me wondering about a couple of things though... Does Jiraiya really recognize Naruto? Who is Minato's father?

Can't wait for more.
schedule September 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Whoa......very differnet from what I expected, but even better than what I predicted! Great job here, loved reading these updates!
person John
schedule August 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
A great story indeed. I wish it was a bit longer with the chapters... I am waiting in anticipation of upcoming events!!! PLease write fast!
person moodysavage
schedule August 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Yeah!!! Start of a new story!!! And what do you mean about people not reading Constellations? I loved Constellations!

This story sounds really interesting too... I hope Naruto doesn't screw things up too much!
schedule August 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I am looking forward to reading the next chapter and I am intrigued at how you will handle the time travel element.