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I THINK I JUST DIED! i've been looking for a story like this for years...... hope you update it!

oho poor naru, it's so sad. I want more, what will happen next ?? see you soon and happy christmas

Too bad this is only a oneshot, I loved this and a Father's advice, now I'm a fan of your work, I will go and read more of your fanfics, I'm specially interested in the fire's bride, I read the mangwa but never finished it. Anyway I'll be sure to check out more from your work in the future.

Great opening!

ok... seriously I would LOVE to see more to this. The ending left me needing to know where it will go. What will happen next. It was beautiful written and made me sad for both of them. For Naruto feeling he had no choice, even losing both of his friends he would sacrafice himself to keep Sasuke intheir village... and forSasuke who didn't feel he could win Naruto any other way. Please write more to it. I have to admit I'm suprised the agreement of the elders didn't come with the additional clause that Sasuke had to produce and heir. Keeping the Sharingon in their village and alive.

Wow this is a really good but sad story... I reallly liked it! But I hope things start looking better for naru in the future!

Awesome. I love the dark ending!!! Great job!

wow! nice plot! can't wait for the next chapter..

please update soon

great story so far. looking forward to the next chapter