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omg i love all your one shots i'm so happy my friend sent this to me and i think you could make these into great stories i hope you keep on writing such fun and smexy stories for us to read and rave about for days

LOVE IT!! :) I just love these two and the story line is very addictive and captivating!!
I must beg you though ....PLEASE dont kill either one of them in this story line...PLEASE!! I would love to see them grow old and grey together and retire from work early to enjoy life together. Cause you know he started as a fireman so young he gets to retire at a younger age. :) GRIN I would love to see more of them from you know like play time at Naruto's firehouse in or on the fire truck could be pretty interesting....ummm and very erotic.....plus they sooooo have to keep spicy trips of fun in Sasuke's own office....and there are so many other places they could have fun in like Naruto is a surfer....hehehe wicked thoughts like sex on the beach at night around a camp fire sounds nice...GRIN :) SWEET

You so need to brings us all back into their lives again on another erotic moment in time!!! :)

I JUST LOVE YOUR STORIES!!

Wow. I mean....wow. Such a wonderful and powerful story! It was definately well told and a beautiful sequal. I love how you kept the characters true to your own interpetation of who they actually were; it was much better reading how they would say "love you" in their own way. Great job!

I LOVE THIS FIC!
God, I love it.
*Satisfied-purring-cat-expression on her face*
Sasuke is so awesome and cute in his own little Uchiha way, and Naruto is just... Naruto. *huggle-rapes Na-Na-kun*
And NA-NA! HW COULD YOU! MAKE SASUKE WORRY LIKE THAT D:
Oh well, you didn't mean to *heart* *huggles again*
AND SASUKEEEEE
KYAAA!!!!
I LOVE YOU *HUG-RAPES SASUKE* (yes, WITH capital letters! :D)
And Kiba is... xD
He reminds me of a friend of mine, lol.

I sincerely wish you'd write a third oneshot in this AU *heart*
(even if it's KibaKarin :P)

Love,
Yentl

Wow, can you write and emotionally heartbreaking story. You can tear a person into tiny pieces on the floor and fix everything again when it seems impossible.

Emotional Roller coaster is what I call this story to me because that's what it was. You really put me and Sasuke through the wringer T_T.. why would you do that?? I could swear to God.. That Naruto was..*sniff* Just, don't do that ever again please. When he switched over the tv, I felt like it was over. My heart was shutting down and clasping so tightly in my chest.

I was kinda confused with the next part and then realized it was flashbacks..Even worse to remember all the greatness when thinking he was gone.
Christ, even I couldn't hold back the tears when he came back...when he came back, I felt my blood flowing again.

You are a WRITER. Not just any kind, but the king that really takes characters and makes them what they are supposed to be.

This was so sweet and sad. You had me really worried for Naruto.

Once again, your stories amaze me. More than the sex (while extremely delicious ;3) it's the love that makes this sooooo worth reading. Keep 'em coming!!

awww poor Sasuke, he thought he had lost Naruto =(. I wonder, if he had do you think he would have gone down there and tried to tear the place apart looking for him??? He seems like the type who would, that's committment...

ahahah naru is alive !! i really throw naru was dead a moment but hopefully he came back !! i really enjoy reading this sequel, see you soon with more

Aww sensitive sasuke is so cute. This is such a sweet fic. I've read it more than once already :)