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by Prism0467

person Daga
schedule November 4, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Sexy, hot but tasteful... This is even better than the previous jiraya/orochimaru story, I really really hope for more.
schedule May 1, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This story is burned with such sultry sinfulness for so little amount of actual rutting going on, it was really a mass of viral pleasure to read my dear. Please if ever the fancy strikes you to write another please don't hesitate, there be a reader waiting.
person nivell
schedule August 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
More JiraOro fics in this universe, please!!! =)
schedule August 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I love this so much. It's perfect. You should totally write a fic of them, like with multiple chapters!
person Lucidize
schedule August 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I was a little surprised when I saw this, so I just had to read it.

This was brilliant. I loved the fact that Orochimaru was shaken up enough by Jiraiya to stalk him at a grocery store.

I loved the hands-free orgasm in the bread aisle. Public humiliation isn't written enough, though I find it incredibly sexy.

Overall, great job!