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August 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
*holds hands up* OK, OK, I won't jump to conclusions but i have some inkling of who Sai's attacker might be *is excited*
Sasuke really needs to talk to Naruto about his late night too. That's unacceptable
Sasuke really needs to talk to Naruto about his late night too. That's unacceptable
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August 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Ahhh! It's like the real show I swear! Im just waiting to hear the music (don don don!). Loved the second chapter and I even have some suspects in mind but I need more evidence to really be sure. Cant wait to read the next one.
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August 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I thought it was definetly interesting. All of a sudden the theme song of Law & Order SVU started going through my head with the cute little type writer type as both Naruto then Sasuke showed up to the crime. Let me guess.. Tsunade is the gruff but still kindhearted boss? She'd probably pawn most her work on Shizune and itch for the days when she was back on the beat. Can't wait to see what happens next and who did this to poor Sai.
Also cute how Sai commented on Naruto's eyes.
Also cute how Sai commented on Naruto's eyes.
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August 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I watch SVU all the time and this made me think that I was watching the show ( minus the naruto characters). Naruto seemed like he was a mix of Bensen and Stabler it's sooo awesome you wrote it very well!
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August 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I think that if you play your cards right, this can be a awesome story. I like how it has started out so far. I cant wait to read more.
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August 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I'm not a fan of Law and Order SVU, but your writing style is crisp and clean and you did a good job describing the setting in a short time. Would like there to be more meat on the bone so to speak because I was just getting into it when the chapter ended. Well good luck!
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August 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wow. This sounds very promising! I look forward to your next update!!
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August 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
OMG!! I Love SVU!! as i;m reading ths i can jut hear the "DUN DUN!" In the background. Love it!
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August 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!! I've never been into this show but, NOW I definitely LOVE this and am definitely into this plot to find out who the culprit is.^^
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August 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Haha, okay, I've been thinking about doing this EXACT thing for a long time now, great to see someone doing it XD. Have Shikamaru in the office, with Ino or Temari as his partner! That would be thoroughly entertaining.. And I just knew that it was Sai in there, it would greatly complicate the detached-victim-thing.. I'm really interested as to what you'll do with this story!