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Well Choji sure was surprised that Shika wanted to wait for Kiba to go with them. I guess Ino's angry for not being told about the mission as well. They fear her for good reason.lol.

I like this story a lot it's cute.

LOL!! That was a funny chapter, what with Kiba right at Shika's,heh heh. I really loved it. The denial is definitely funny but cuddly Shika is to just die for.

I really love your story, it's the best i've read so far :)
go kiba/Shika <3
keep up the good work :D

OMG!!! Thank you so much for the wonderful dedication of this bonus!!!! This was a sweet bonus with Naruto checking on them. Kiba's inner turmoil was a bit funny when he said, "...hell I'm straight." Oh I can't wait for the way Shika will respond to Kiba's tenderness with his own.(squeeee) Again thank you so much for this special dedication, I think you're AWESOME!!!

Awww, poor Shika but at the same time poor Kiba because he's so so worried that he isnt even thinking about himself. Also, I never even thought about how Shika's thoughts work. I KNOW he is going through HELL. I hope he wont be traumatized too much longer.:( I really love to see the tenderness between them, I just melt.

I have been enjoying reading this story but it was Tsunade explaining how someone like Shikamaru would experience the abuse, the endless possibilities he would see, that made it stand out to me. I would very much like to continue reading, so I hope you will continue posting.

NOOOOOOO!!!! write i say! write write!!!
a fantastically well written story you have formed my dear. i am now a huge shipper of this couple because of you. i beg you to post more of this fabulously hot couple!!1

Yaaay!!! Is Shino the jealous rival?!! OMG!!! I can't WAIT!! I'm soooo excited!!!!XDD

I liked the talk they had about their sexual past and Temari hitting Shika over the head with her fan, hilarious!! I can totally see that.XD I also liked how vulnerable Shika was in Kiba's big strong arms. As for other couples, how about Naru/Neji? Geez, I can't remember if you referenced Naruto and Sasuke being together already. How about when they get back to Konoha, Shika's crush tries to hurt Kiba because, "you can't even keep Shika safe on a
mission!" Something like that. Maybe a jealous Sasuke or Shino or something. Unless you don't wanna take it in that direction. Well I gave it a shot and I hope it was helpful in some way.^^