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for The Price of Love I

by JaydenNara

schedule November 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Aww, that was so sweet how you portrayed Shika liking the idea of being in control over their time together. I also loved Kiba's reaction to Shika's surprise at topping him. I really love this story and also love the direction you're taking their situation. I sure will hate to see this end.
schedule November 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I love this story it sooooo rocks & dominate Shika is awesome.
Can't wait till the next is out.
schedule November 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
OMG I CAN'T BELIEVE YOU STOPPED IT THERE HOW TERRIBLY VICIOUS AND CRUEL!!!!
person tjrender
schedule November 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This is very hot---Kiba is so strong; for him to submit out of love is incredibly sexy. Looking forward to the next installment---
schedule November 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
you nasty tease you *snuggles* keep it up its one of the reasons i read this tale outside of the great writing lol
person tjrender
schedule November 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wow, Yoshino's a pretty cold piece of work to disown her only child---hopefully Shikaku will make her see reason. Meanwhile, we're getting to the 'nitty-gritty' in this lovely tale: let the lemon commence !
schedule November 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Girl, do your thing. This has been worth the wait!
person Nejislady
schedule November 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh yeah!!! Shika took a stand on the only obstacle in their relationship. I really hope something or someone enables her to come around toward Kiba but most of all, her own son. I can NOT wait for the lemon. I Loved when Shika whispered he was ready. My heart melted. 'swoon'
person DarkAngelBlossom
schedule November 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Ugh! right when it's getting to the good part. That so unfair 0_0. But great story, i'm looking forward for the update! ^u^
schedule October 30, 2010 at 12:00 AM
LOL. I wish Kiba HAD lifted Shikamaru over his shoulder, how cute that would've been. It was hilarious how Shika reacted to him saying that. I am so happy they've confessed to eachother. I am so looking forward to the next chapter. Thank you for the quick update. =3