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for The Price of Love I

by JaydenNara

person cynaga
schedule October 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Ch 26 was AMAZING~! I loved the scene between Neji and Akamaru and the one between the Naruto clones and Kiba too!!!

I almost stopped being mad at you for making us wait over 26 chapters to see Kiba and Shika get together... *wink*
schedule October 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
*pouts at* it ended to soon this time lol i wanted to keep reading
person Nejislady
schedule October 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Nooooo!!! Another cliffie.T.T I was so touched how you didn't leave Neji's part hanging for us to assume he'd be fine later or something. Thank you cuz I obviously love him to pieces.XD I cracked up when you wrote about Neji groaning from pride not pain, that was so funny.XD
schedule October 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Darnit, you keep on separating them! Shikamaru is a freaking basket case. GIVE HIM HIS MAN ALREADY!
person angela
schedule October 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I'm glad neji didn't hurt kiba, that would have sucked. Really looking forward 2 them finally telling each other that they love each other :D
person Tawanawelch
schedule October 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I loved Neji's demeanor throughout the whole occurrence with Kiba. I thought Kiba was funny when he heard Neji say that Shika loves him. I am so happy he knows now. I hope you grace us with another quick update.XD
person bijouxtoo
schedule October 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I am SO glad no one died---and I was actually quite moved by Neji's eloquence. Now that Kiba understands Shika loves him, I can hardly wait to read what happens next. I'll be sad to see this story conclude, it's been a great read !
person POHness1
schedule October 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
*Shakes head in amusement* love sagas are such interesting things. we knew that they loved each other and they didn't. tho with Shikamaru's condition i doubt anything would have resolved itself. so... i guess the whole Neji thing was a good thing... i still dont like Neji for what he did, but he apologized so he'd kool now. ^_^ but, more importantly, FINALLY the reunion is coming! took long enough. lol
schedule October 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Kiba is such a knucklehead. ^_^
schedule October 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
That was a great chapter!! I loved what Shika had to say about Neji and that he understood what was happening. Hopefully Shikaku will as well. I'm so excited about Kiba coming back. As for another couple, maybe there could be someone else for Neji like Sai or Shino or gaara. I'll have to think of other possible couples as well. I can NOT wait for the next chapter, but I know I have to. T.T