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for Tempest in a Teacup

by Ljiljana

schedule August 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Man, I want to read more but...that Sasuke sure is rude. And he's got a chip--of course Naruto isn't going to just shrug his shoulders at the thought of the Uchiha brothers being together that way at first; Sasuke should be more tolerant. He's pushing the whole idea on Naruto without regard for him on the basis that he and Itachi are both adults and it's none of Naruto's business. Which is ridiculous, because the Uchiha brothers are displacing Naruto in order to have their liaisons.

Anyway, I still anticipate your next chapter. ^_^
person nivell
schedule August 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Please do continue!
person Anon
schedule August 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Seems like Sasuke is trying to run a scenario on Naruto. He could be trying to get Naruto interested in joining him and Itachi, but he could be driving a wedge between Naruto and them. Which way will it be? I just hope that Naruto does not give in easily. After what Sasuke pulled with his brother to get back at Naruto in his own hissy fit type way, I think he definitely needs to work hard on deserving Naruto's affection or even his friendship. It was a really crappy thing to do. Even Itachi was questioning it.

Before that part happened, in my head, I wished Naruto could have taken a step away from the situation so he could be more objective. If that were the case, then when Sasuke called him on his "tired" excuse, Naruto could have flipped the script on him. He could have been like... 'No, I'm not really that tired, but since subtlety does not seem to be working and you are rearing for a confrontation, then, I don't appreciate your insensitivity by throwing your intimacies in my face seemingly whenever you two get a chance (maybe not wording it quite that way, but you get the picture). Do you know how that makes me feel? Do you even care? I guess not. Maybe its time I start looking for another place to live.' Something like this might have lit a fire under Sasuke to let him know that his approach on enticing Naruto (if that is what he is trying to do) sucks.

Just a thought.