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March 7, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh my....don't stop!!!! Hot chapter!
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March 7, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 13...
NOOOOO... CLIFFHANGER !!!!!!!!!!!!!
NOOOOO... CLIFFHANGER !!!!!!!!!!!!!
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March 7, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Sooo intense! And so good! Great chapter!
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March 6, 2011 at 12:00 AM
OMFG how do you do this?! You have a gift. God, what a visual! I'm combusting right now...
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March 6, 2011 at 12:00 AM
OMG OMG OMG
I am not worthy of such excellent fan fiction~! Too hot...
I am not worthy of such excellent fan fiction~! Too hot...
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March 6, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I really like how Itachi has responded to Haku. Kimi has taken care of and loves Haku and even though Itachi wanted Kimi like crazy... Haku's stress helped to make Itachi connect and care about his feelings rather just some "getting to know you because I like Kimi" situation. Very well done there. And as for their connection now? Really really hot and sexy while still keeping the caring and concern. I REALLY like that.
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February 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This is story which I wanted to continue so bad.. and now finally so many chapters I read :D eh, I must admit that at first I was slightly disappointed that Itachi is the one... because I just couldn't still get out of my mind the scene with Kiba... I can see Itachi as someone who likes to switch ... but not to be sub to Kiba... That just doesn't work in my mind... Pain, Kisame, Kakashi... YES... but Kiba!!!??... hm... So, when I found out that Itachi is the Dom... I just couldn't imagine that he would be so perfect for two of them and the perfect person because he has so many experiences from both sides and he would know how to manage two subs who had morbid and sick doms... So, I changed my mind about Itachi and now I have a much better opinion about him... if it wasn't for this story... I would still be disappointed about him. Thank you for this great story :) please continue :) It shows that even if everything is bad that there is still some hope...
But,... heheheh I definitely didn't expect such a horror mansion, not to mention iron maiden... I burst out laughing because of such disappointment in battler that this torture device Iron Maiden wasn't in use... hahaha So, Itach definitely has sadistic servants, hehehehe... Amazing :D I love this horror mansion... But I got scared a little... I mean... Itachi lives in that mansion all by himself??? Eh...scary and disturbing. Not to mention so much lonely.
I can't wait to see what will happen next :)
But,... heheheh I definitely didn't expect such a horror mansion, not to mention iron maiden... I burst out laughing because of such disappointment in battler that this torture device Iron Maiden wasn't in use... hahaha So, Itach definitely has sadistic servants, hehehehe... Amazing :D I love this horror mansion... But I got scared a little... I mean... Itachi lives in that mansion all by himself??? Eh...scary and disturbing. Not to mention so much lonely.
I can't wait to see what will happen next :)
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February 12, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This story is amazing. I love everything about it!
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February 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Gosh, your story had me hooked up right from the first chapter. You have made ItachiXKimimaroXHaku pairing so convincing!! It's my first time reading up on this pairing and i totally loved it because of you.
You have made the characters realistic. I love the way you explain their emotions and in the latest chapter, the narration for Itachi's house is superb!! Good one on the flamingo. Hehe.
Since Itachi loves roses, what do you think of a scene of them on a bed of rose petals?? It'll be better if Haku/Kimi or both have their hands bound, all ready for the taking on a bed of roses. OK.. Bad thought!! It's still too early for them at this stage ne..
I'm looking forward to your next chapter~~
Give a Hug to Haku, Kimi and Itachi for me.
Thank you so much for the hard work!! =D
You have made the characters realistic. I love the way you explain their emotions and in the latest chapter, the narration for Itachi's house is superb!! Good one on the flamingo. Hehe.
Since Itachi loves roses, what do you think of a scene of them on a bed of rose petals?? It'll be better if Haku/Kimi or both have their hands bound, all ready for the taking on a bed of roses. OK.. Bad thought!! It's still too early for them at this stage ne..
I'm looking forward to your next chapter~~
Give a Hug to Haku, Kimi and Itachi for me.
Thank you so much for the hard work!! =D
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February 10, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I like the fact that this story is mostly Kimmimaro x Haku. It's more realistic that Itachi wasn't quickly and easily brought into the picture, and that they didn't instantly fall in love with him, though they do desire him. I think it might be nice, actually, if the three of them never fall in love in a conventional sense. What I mean is, rather than a grand romance, I think it would be much nicer if the three of them were to form a little family since that's what I think they all need most. (Of course, it would also be a family that has sex...) Itachi fits into their lives because he's a lot like Kimmimaro and Haku are--gentle and just a little lost. It's good for them that he's not a psycho dom, actually. He can play the role in bed so they have sexual fulfillment, but doesn't live his life that way. After putting up with Orochimaru and Zabuza, Kimmimaro and Haku really don't need to be with someone like that again. (But I wonder, if Itachi is a switch, would there ever be times when he might like to be dominated? And would Kimmimaro + Haku together be able to play that role for him?)