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for Deprivation

by Darkprism

person Vex
schedule September 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Who is this mystery man?!
I keep thinking Orochimaru due to the fact he was so deeply involved with Kimi?

I don't know but I sure want to!
schedule September 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
"Iruka in a dark suit and fedora" -- oh, my god somebody fan art this please?! That one line made the ENTIRE chapter.

I share Kimimaro's anxiety and surprise. I can't wait to find out who his dom is!
person Vex
schedule September 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Ohhh~ Ending here of all places!

But this chapter was just so titillating and has left me on edge.
Wonderful!
person qwerty
schedule September 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Ah! i'm so on edge!
great chapter!
person Brigette
schedule September 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Ok so I don't review stories very often. I much perfer just being a voyeur. However, I have to say that I love ALL of your stories!! This one has a special place in my heart for very personal reasons. I am all a shiver with anticipation. I hope you can find a loving Master for Haku and Kimimaru. The thought of a loving comitted threesome with one Dom is very intriguing. The way that you write a Scene is amazingly detailed without going overboard and leaving us bored. That is no easy task and you handle it flawlessly. I wait quite impatiently. Thank-You!!
schedule September 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
You know, you are terrible when you leave such huge cliff hangers. -cries-
person Carousel
schedule September 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This is one of my favorite stories by you yet. <3 I love Kimi/Haku and I can't wait to find out who the mystery Master is. Beautiful smut scenes. <3 Update soon.
person Nivell
schedule September 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Short chapters!! Aww man, I wanted to see who Kimi's mysterious man is....dun dun dun, be it's ****** or *** or oh effit, *waits patiently for the next chapter*
schedule September 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I look forward to each update of this story. The language is so rich. You can almost smell and feel it. The vulnerability of both Kimimaro and Haku is breathtaking and the idea of Kimimaro being willing to take risks in order to look after Haku, even going out of his comfort zone, is wonderful.
person qwerty
schedule September 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Great (but shorter) chapter! I'm excited to find out who's the stranger!
Keep going!