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for Deprivation

by Darkprism

schedule September 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Holy shit! That was short, but sweet! I can imagine the two of them writhing together in a bed. Sensual!
person Ambie-Chan
schedule September 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Woot! I love your stories. I really enjoy how you write the characters and just your general descriptive ability-amazing. NaruSasu is definitely my favorite pairing but Kakashi and Iruka are growing on me. Kimimaro and Haku as well. And it's big thanks to you! I can't wait to see the mystery man. Update soon please!
person Tarn Vedra 5
schedule September 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
You know... I really had a bad day and this new chapter 3 made me so happy :) As usual I can't wait to see what will happen next and what will happen to both of them. Thank you for your stories. They are really magnificent. Hm... will you please maybe, if you want give some hints who could be that VIP person... :) Please :) I like to guess :)
schedule September 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
that was really good and sneaky of you to not reveal what was in that folder in that chapter. though i have to say as much as i am enjoying this is there going to be an updater for the gaara story?
person qwerty
schedule September 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Such a good story. Loved this chapter. I cannot wait to find out who wants Kimi!
person Carousel
schedule August 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This was soooooo brilliant! I love all the stories in your series and I am so excited about this one. I hope you reveal the mystery Master soon, and I hope everyone is gonna be happy. =] I'm trying to guess who it is and I've come to a conclusion it is an Akatsuki member. I was originally thinking Itachi but then I remember he was a sub of sorts for Kiba in the Kiba/Gaara story.

Please update soon! =]
person Tarn Vedra 5
schedule August 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wow, you really made me curious who is this VIP member that wants Kimimaro so much... You really made me curious. I hope it is Ibiki. I just like that guy :) He is so frightening and yet he is for sure like a teddy bear. You are one really talented writer because I can read even other pairs which I have never considered to read but I read it because it is so well written with passion and charisma. AWWWw... Neji is so considerate and kind in his aristocratic way, but I have never expected anything less of him. He is one very protective person and I like that about him :). I like Kimimaro also, he is strong and handsome person.

Ah, I just hope that you won't make us to wait for long to see who is this guy for Kimimaro.
person volaju66
schedule August 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I can't wait to see who it is that wants him and who will take Haku.
person nivell
schedule August 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Love your stories and can't wait for more!
schedule August 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I am so looking forward to the rest of this. I thoroughly enjoy this world of yours and am delighted that you have chosen to feature Haku.