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September 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I have to say this story is written beautifully you can feel the pain the characters are going through especially Fugaku I can't wait to see what happens next! Great chapter!!!
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September 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wow, poor Sasuke. And damn Fugaku for condemning their relationship! I can't wait to read what happens next
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September 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
As usual, fine work. But oh god.. Poor Sasuke and Itachi. And poor Fugaku. Minato - not your smartest move yet. I hope this dosen't result in Fugaku completely removing his sons from Naruto, and forcing them to stay away from each other, it would devastate them. Looking forward to the next chapter!
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September 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Poor Uchiha family. I send them my condolences.
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September 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
wow! wonderful plot interesting!
I just found this story today! and i didnt even noticed that this story was written by one of my favorite authors...
what will happen now? will Fugaku stop allowing Sasuke to be with Naruto?
please update soon!
is this story an Naruto and Sasuke pairing too?
I just found this story today! and i didnt even noticed that this story was written by one of my favorite authors...
what will happen now? will Fugaku stop allowing Sasuke to be with Naruto?
please update soon!
is this story an Naruto and Sasuke pairing too?
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September 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Fugaku's drinking, his family's deterioration, and the hurried and afterwards awkward bathroom sex. They're all real and they could be happening to a family anywhere. You're doing such a great job of portraying grief and its effects. Keep it up! And I'm hoping for more Fugaku/Minato action in the future. ;D
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September 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh my....Minato, you should have kept your tongue in your mouth! Four months is still a short period of time...can't wait for the next chapter!
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September 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Fugaku is such a fool. How could he let Minato go like that?! He better realize his mistake soon. I can't wait for next chapter!
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September 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wow.. I really, REALLY like this fic! What exactly is Itachi's feeling about Naruto? Will there be some sibling rivalry about Naruto's attention? Poor Fugaku, you could just imagine how much everything would fall apart if Minato hadn't been there. Looking forward to the next chapter!
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September 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This fic just delivers. It's so rare to see a well thought out story for this pairing. There are some typos here and there. But we can always let those slide. Keep the drama going. And keep writing!