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for Fine Lines

by yolotengo

person miko vampire
schedule October 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Itachi should tell Sasuke that, If Sasuke tells anyone than Itachi will turn his brother in for the weed, sexual harassment to Naruto, and anything else he has done/and or/doing, that will shut the little fucker up!!!!!

ment to put this in frist post of this my email- frasca01@aol.com
person Anon
schedule October 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I cant wait til the new chapter. I wanna kill Sasuke.
schedule October 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
What a brat! Sasuke is such a little brat and I can't wait for Itachi to get him... :)
person LadyWolf
schedule October 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I just want to beat the ever living shit out of Sasuke! ...yeah, that sounds like a doable plan...

I hope everything turns out right for the lovers...:o(

Great Job!
I can't wait to read more!
schedule October 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
anything to get nii sans attention huh
schedule October 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
great chapter! pretty hot too! >8D hopefully you'll update soon! XD
person cynaga
schedule October 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Heading towards a threesome? Nasty way for Sasuke to inititate...
person saya_kye420
schedule October 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
great chapter and i cant wait for the next chapter to come out, so until then ja ne.
person Anon
schedule September 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
love this chapter and im really looking forward to the next one to come out. are you planing on making this mpreg by the way? it would make things alot more difficult for itachi & naruto. so until then ja ne.
person saya_kye420
schedule September 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
are you planing on putting this story on fanfic?