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for Fine Lines

by yolotengo

person saya_kye420
schedule September 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
this is a great story and im really looking forward the next chapter to come out. so until then ja ne.
schedule September 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
i love this story and I can't wait to read more about those two...they are amoung my favorite yaoi couple in all of Naruto land.
person Kirai
schedule September 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I am so hot and turned on, even without the instant sex in the first chapters this story is such a turn-on. I love so much about this story it is hard to try and think of how to put my thoughts into words for you. I love so much it is hard to start with just one. Well I will start with Sasuke-kuns jelouscy, such alittle sibling thing to be when you see your older sibling more happy then yourself. And the line from after when Itachi-san told his lil bro, "and watch your language" Made me laugh. I loved how they respod to each other. I also really enjoyed how even if Itachi was irked with Naruto he still got to keep himself in-check till Naruto opened up to him. Thank you so much and I do look forward to many new and exciting chapters.
person xenawp532
schedule September 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I love this story. Is there any way you can email me, to let me know when the next chapter is ready. Thanks that would be great. Tammy
P.S. email Tammy_herndon86@yahoo.com
person Miko Vampire
schedule September 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I ca't wait for Itachi to tell Sasuke to shut the fuck up and to leave Naru alone or else!!!!!
schedule August 31, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wow, how intense. I really love how loving and tender Itachi is with his young student. I really like this pairing. I used to be sooo into Sasu/Naru, but I have definitely branched out and come to really love this couple.^^
schedule August 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wow! A great Story! Thank you for something so different and so engaging. Thank you again