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December 11, 2016 at 12:00 AM
I think you have a slight problem every quotation and apastophe mark is a diamond with a question mark in it.
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January 12, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I just had to say what an amazing story this is. Great detail and skilled writing - Congratulations : )
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August 30, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This was amazing. The plot was clever and the smut was so hot. <3
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August 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
A round of Fangasm shots on me!! And it's only 9 in the morning (really,i promise)
You may have outdone yourself with this one, Pet. Although, I imagine Gernam Gaara will be filling your head with many more games for your writing to play with lol. I will say that there are points where I wasn't sure which perspective was which because there were too many 'he's' that didn't really have any indication as to whome was speaking or thinking until afterwards.
Other than that, WOAH! Choking, biting, palm tingling spanking and even a kinda sweet moment at the end. HOw touching yet......KIBA THAT'S A NAZI!!! Ah but who cares, he's so cute and german.
I'm still a nazi bastard, don't ruin my reputation. WEll done with that part too, i was in giggles for quite a while after that one lol
You may have outdone yourself with this one, Pet. Although, I imagine Gernam Gaara will be filling your head with many more games for your writing to play with lol. I will say that there are points where I wasn't sure which perspective was which because there were too many 'he's' that didn't really have any indication as to whome was speaking or thinking until afterwards.
Other than that, WOAH! Choking, biting, palm tingling spanking and even a kinda sweet moment at the end. HOw touching yet......KIBA THAT'S A NAZI!!! Ah but who cares, he's so cute and german.
I'm still a nazi bastard, don't ruin my reputation. WEll done with that part too, i was in giggles for quite a while after that one lol