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September 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Ok yeah, Naruto is definitely worse off than before. Sai's really doesn't realize by throwing Naruto out that he just gave Naruto away to Sasuke. Is he still gonna claim Naruto as his? And/or will he still want him? Yaaay!! Sasuke to the rescue. Yeah, he was lookin pretty good back there. Poor Naruto, will he finally be able to understand the situation he's in? All of his friends and Tsunade will be so pissed at Sai' behavior.
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September 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Sai that corpse looking asshole! Sasuke should beat him to a bloody plup so he can know how it feels! Poor Naruto just cant do any right in Sai's eyes.
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September 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I actually am getting to like this story, I wasn't sure if I would but my friend suggested it.
With the latest chapter (4) though with all the capitalized and bold warnings over it I imagined somthing much worse than just getting the shit beat out of him. Not that I want Naruto to get raped of course.
With the latest chapter (4) though with all the capitalized and bold warnings over it I imagined somthing much worse than just getting the shit beat out of him. Not that I want Naruto to get raped of course.
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September 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
thanx for the warning ... i ended up skipping the beating and going to the fluffy sasunaru. ;-) i don't know about anyone else, but SAI HAS TO DIE!!!! or at least get beaten up. i mean, he MAKES naru say why he's said then sets haru up to supposedly "lief". yep, he's gotta go down and down hard. ;)
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September 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
"Never happen again"... Maybe he means that next time he won't stand on Naruto's chest.
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September 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Yeah I totally love "the abused man being saved by someone" too.^^ And you have a cruel Sai which is great and different. It'll be so cool having Sasuke be the rescuer this time.:3
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September 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Well I liked the chapter very much because I like Sasuke being a chef and can picture him being calm and reserved. I feel bad about not being a shinobi at all anymore cuz he was so great at it especially with his family's own jutsu. I also like Sasuke trying to make Naruto see the situation he's in. I love when Sasuke is not so moody and pedictable but human.^^
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September 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
yes, i like your sasuke; if he had any sense and took at look at how he was acting, he'd settle down like you've described. ;-) nice job!
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September 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I really like the way Naruto acts, just seems right. Sasuke is missing his normally prick-ness, but I think it would be right if he was a little older and learned important life lessons like true friendship. I like him, which is kinda rare of me. :) Only thing that bugged me a little, more in the first chapter then the second, is the point of view changes cover too much of the same scene twice. I like the style, but sometimes too much of the same thing is repeated, even though it is from both set of eyes. I am going to bookmark this story. I can't wait to read more!