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for Bits and Pieces: Naruto

by Strailo

person smint45
schedule April 9, 2017 at 12:00 AM

oh my god the drabbles this time where as always amazing!!! And so many for me!!!! That made me really happy!!! I especially liked the Sasuke/Itachi/Naruto and the Minato/Itachi but the other s were fantastic too^^ Thank you so much for the post and see you again on monday!!!

person smint45
schedule March 23, 2017 at 12:00 AM

The newest drabble was really sweet I liked it a lot!!! Thank you for sharing see you Friday!!!

person smint45
schedule March 18, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Really  nice drabble^^ I loved the end where the girls get the obsession with gay sex^^ See you soon!!!

person smint45
schedule March 8, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Nice start for the drabbles^^ Like it a lot!!! Hope we will see some threesome smutt soon!!! See you on Friday with Our Truths!!!

person Qriiz
schedule October 6, 2016 at 12:00 AM

can I request for Naru/male Haku? they are hard to find pairing.

person Lil-lo
schedule October 29, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Ch 3- Poor Itachi! When I saw the title I was thinking it would be a bait and switch and the noises would be love making on a bed, so now I'm really bummed out D:
schedule March 26, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Can you do a Deidara Rapefic? I'm horrible to poor Dei, I know, but he makes the most adorable uke! You seem like a really good writer, and I think you could pull it off.
person Jen
schedule December 30, 2011 at 12:00 AM
"Sunsets and Truces" was very nice. I love canon fic the most. As a matter of fact, something along these lines is exactly what I'm hoping will happen after the 4th Shinobi War ends. I think it would be too much after everything that Sasuke did for Konoha to immediately welcome him back with open arms. At the same time, I don't think Sasuke could easily jump right back into being a loyal Konoha ninja either. Which is all well and good except for the fact that Naruto also needs to regain Sasuke's friendship, otherwise, he's still failed at "bringing Sasuke back." So I think this is a nice compromise for all of these problems: Naruto + Sasuke are friends again, and Sasuke + Konoha can slowly get used to each other again. Hopefully by the time Naruto gets those pardons, there won't be as many hard feelings about Sasuke getting his forehead protector back. Well let's see what Kishimoto has in store for us. :)
person G
schedule December 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
WTF. Meeting My Brother's Lover was an okay story up until it was randomly revealed that Kisame was a demon. Where did that come from?

And Sasuke agreeing to be their third also came out of nowhere. He didn't seem remotely interested in either guy at any point in the story. There was one sentence (and only one) about Sasuke having always wanted Itachi, but that was a total surprise because he never acted like it. And there was nothing about him being attracted to Kisame at all.

Sorry, the story just didn't work for me.
schedule July 7, 2011 at 12:00 AM
hey, do you think ya can do an Orochimaru Sasuke One?