rate_review Reviews

I feel dirty....but i loved it >.< Soo cute at the end. also gotta love that line 'did you pee in me?' ehehe

I liked it... I don't knwo what that says about me... but I liked it and it was hot.

definately more playing around... would a kid that young cum?
still cute though

Uhh, I liked it, though I think there would be more messing around at that age, rather than going straight to it. And, just so you know for future reference, boys can't cum at that age.

Nice idea, but although it started out interesting towards the end it just became another mature seen. At that age there would be a lot more exploring first.

Who cares if someone thinks this story is wrong, it's "fiction". I thought it was great, and the ending was so sweet, after I post this, I will look for other stories by you and read them. Keep doing what you're doing, you're on the right track, and if anyone does have issues with what you wrote, you did warn them and it's their own fault for ignoring the warning and reading anyway.