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For some reason, AFF sucks in terms of reviews. Dx But I am here to say! I didn't want to read this at first. That sounds awful- but I knew it was going to be really, really emotional... and that is what makes it absolutely beautiful. The reader knows that they're going to go through an emotional roller coaster- they're feeling the setting. They're feeling the characters- they are fully alive and in that moment of pain, pleasure, joy, and misery. It takes a good writer to be able to drag an audience into all those emotions and out again. I have so little emotional energy. That sounds weird- but it is a thing unique to me. I can't put up with too much drama- because I feel every second of it, and it takes a toll on me. I fought through the hard parts of this piece because I knew the ending would be worth it. I knew that it had to have a beautiful ending- it just had to. And I was right- and it was worth it..and I hope these thoughts are enough to keep you writing. I'm sorry we suck at reviews. ):

I absolutely loved this. It was one of the best Kakita and the added Shikamaru was hot. Great story!

Love your stories!!! This one was nice as well though i kind of felt bad for itachi for some reason. I felt as if shikamaru's thoughts on itachi's beauty should have been felt. Because otherwise it just felt one sided. Still loved it though !! Please continue to write. I love the fact that you have itachi in your stories

I very much enjoyed your stories. I like Itachi and Shikamaru, you sure you don't want to write a sequal? Because the threesome scene was HOT! (i equally liked 'give me your all') The wasy you mix dominant plays, sex and emotion is very nice. Even though some stories don't have a interesting plot, and just smut it doesn't look like cheap porn. Very well done :D Seeing Itachi dominated is a turn-on ^_^ Please keep writing!

Dammit. noooooo. you can't end it here! T_T where's all the wonderful smex?
If you HAVE to end it, maybe you can write up a side fic for what happened to Naruto or Iruka? *__* (more interested in the Naruto one but you have a knack for making even odd threesomes possible lol).
Blah, never liked Sasuke anyways. So no tears about his death :p

This was a really great story where you explored the relationship of Kakashi and Itachi that I always thought there could be.

For a relatively short story you still managed to explore the past, the present and talkings of the future so congratulations on that. It's a really beautiful story with nice lemons but the undertone of heavy emotions involved with all participants still reigning through.

/Greetz

*has waited till now to read and review*

hot damn. seriously. that was yummy and hot... though i kinda wish i could have a further exploration of the threesome once they're completely secure in each other. *chuckles* this was delicious, dear. thanks for writing and posting.

Loved this~! Nice relationship dynamics btn the three.

FANTASTIC! Can't wait for more.